green devil Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 these are my second cards please tell me how i could make them better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal666 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 The pictures are very good, I like them. The effects are awesome but you should correct the mistakes in the name and text. Perhaps change the effect of "Ritual Elimination", you could add: "Pay 1000 Life Points. Destroy... ", because it would be too easy. A little price to pay... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Wrong Components:"Pay 500 Life Points to negate the activation of a Ritual Spell Card and destroy it".By the way, there are no Counter Spells...only Counter Traps. So you must change it to a Trap Card ;). Ritual Elimination:"Pay 500 Life Points to destroy all Ritual Monsters on the field". If you change it, the rating will be 8/10.For now, it is 7,4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 way too bland of effects, they should have more, and drawbacks with them 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 The effects are simple and OCG needs to be improved 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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