dr.octagonapus6969 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 ok so i made another new card please tell me what you think or if i should make some improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph bartle-coe Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 nice card. :) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Yep, nice concept:DWork on the picture and OCG;)8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Work on your grammar, and find a better picture. I like the idea of this card though, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 eh, spelling/OCG is bad...here's a fix-up ---- When this card is activated, you may x amount of Life Points to destroy an opponent's monster whose Star Level is equal to the number of Life Points you paid divided by 10......or something like that...pic needs work...6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicky-whyte Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Re-work the sentence a bit ... i like the effect but change it to sumfing like "when this card is activated destroy all level 8 or higher monsters on field, and deal 800 points of damage to the controlers of the destroyed monsters. When a level 8 monster is summoned, destroy it and deal 800 points of damage to the controller of that monster." Im assuming the effect was sumfing like that but i love you card ... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Work on your grammar' date=' and find a better picture. I like the idea of this card though, 7/10.[/quote']everything stated above but...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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