JG. Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 That's right, I finally made a half-decent smudge tag! CnC and Class. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Smudging seems poor to be honest.Lightning is off, and it needs some different colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Eh, I think the lighting is ok =/ But thanks for your opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 I don't see said lighting ;-; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Lighting = Bottom Right, see it? If not, oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 =.= The lightning is coming from near her face in the stock, and I see no lightning in the bottom right. Check some of Shadius' smudge tags, there is clear lightning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 =.= The lightning is coming from near her face in the stock' date=' and I see no lightning in the bottom right. Check some of Shadius' smudge tags, there is clear lightning.[/quote'] Fix'd. And ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Lack of lighting makes it seem very flat and plain, no depth and the smudging isn't good at all. The focal isn't very interesting and it just doesn't feel good. Low beginner, and that's being generous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Low beginner Lol, it isn't that bad. =P Low novice. It's flat, but the smudging isn't horrible. Seriously needs more depth, lighting, and less blending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Lack of lighting makes it seem very flat and plain' date=' no depth and the smudging isn't good at all. The focal isn't very interesting and it just doesn't feel good. Low beginner, and that's being generous.[/quote'] Weren't you the one giving GHawk Inters for a Low Novice? Make up your mind, be nice or be mean xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Bad smudging. Also she's randomly placed there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Lack of lighting makes it seem very flat and plain' date=' no depth and the smudging isn't good at all. The focal isn't very interesting and it just doesn't feel good. Low beginner, and that's being generous.[/quote'] Weren't you the one giving GHawk Inters for a Low Novice? Make up your mind, be nice or be mean xD When was this? I'm not a smudge person but I think its descent. Different color smudge would be nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 @Altair: I even followed teh Rule of Thirds T_T@Ghawk: A week or 2 ago. Actually, it might have been LZ, not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I was just stating my opinion on the tag. And no, I didn't even rate the GHawk signature that you mentioned. I'm just giving my honest opinion, no more and no less. I'm awful at sigs anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I know, I was just pointing out that you were wrong, I wasn't critizising you or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I know' date=' I was just pointing out that you were wrong, I wasn't critizising you or anything.[/quote'] Okay, perhaps I'll give it High Beginner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I know' date=' I was just pointing out that you were wrong, I wasn't critizising you or anything.[/quote'] Okay, perhaps I'll give it High Beginner. That's probably about right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I believe this is solid novice, IMO. The smudge is good, but it needs more colors. Also, the lighting isn't much; try adding something to it. It's not bad, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Seems very flat. Lighting would help. Also, I would like more colors. Too much pink is too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Its alright. The smuding is pretty good. It is kidna flat and lighting isn't very strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Thanks for commenting guys, I'll take tips into account next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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