The Emperor of Mankind Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 http: Can a mod delete this please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 ... Do you play Yugioh? With that aside:1. Do not use fake Types2. Images could be better (including backgrounds)3. "Astropath" is underpowered, and "Corax" is extremely overpowered4. Effect OCG is way off! Yugioh effects do not usually have that type of structure.5. There are cards mentioned that you have not posted yet. Overall: No, no, no. 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaT PeePs Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 dude.. you really need to work on these :/i mean OCG (official card grammer) is way WAY offi startedoff bad too but youll get the hang of it :)1/10 srry :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Emperor of Mankind Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I played the game(a while back) grammar bad? what you mean? I did spellchecking... "more will be uploaded later, as the card maker is not agreeing with me right now..." read please. ALL primarchs are uber-powerful(I need to find a way to make it hard to obtain them) again on the Astropath: read The Emperor. also to get what these cards are try reading on Warhammer 40K(I have a ton of cards to make) lol. so, care to explain what/how it needs redone instead of saying what is bad? I'm a blunt kind of person, I don't take hints very well... as for the fake types, why is there no drop list? hmm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaT PeePs Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 your cards are too powerful and there effects are too strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Emperor of Mankind Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 look up WH40K if I made the God-Emperor weaker I'd be castrating him(along with the Primarchs) afterall, you know this is just for fun(or else they'd have drop lists in the card maker) Drop lists make things more official, and other Decks I had plans on making will have something equally powerful. I'm a WH40K player, I know their strengths and weakness's, if you think you can do it, care to share points/effects that'd make them fair? I actually dropped ann the Primarchs Attack and Defense down. I actually, wonder... how can an Astropath be underpowered if he is mean't only for sacrifice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Their stats don't go above 5000, it's like a rule (2950 if it’s a Vanilla). Nothing is stronger than FGD or Dragon Master Knight. You could however make their effect say that their ATK becomes 7000/10000. Either way your cards are bad with tones of OCG errors. You need better images and more of an understanding of Yugioh and as to what constitutes a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Emperor of Mankind Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Their stats don't go above 5000' date=' it's like a rule (2950 if it’s a Vanilla). Nothing is stronger than FGD or Dragon Master Knight. You could however make their effect say that their ATK becomes 7000/10000. Either way your cards are bad with tones of OCG errors. You need better images and more of an understanding of Yugioh and as to what constitutes a good card.[/quote'] Like I said, Drop lists would make it all official(why say:"you can only use dah dah dah types" when you can pretty much type out what you want?) Astropath is mean't only for sacrifice. Guess I could make a spell card the increases The Emperor from 5000 to 7000/7000 I weakened the Primarchs to be about as strong as Obelisk the Tormentor. and don't complain about nothing changing yet(I'm working on it) when it changes, feel free to complain/whatever. umm... better images? care to elaborate? I mentioned I'm a blunt kind of person... And as with the understanding of yugioh, of course I understand it, it's a card game, with a few cards overpriced(of course you can say the same about Warhammer models, but their plastic and metal) compared to paper. please, please, please people, DON'T tell me what's wrong with them and expect me to see it, instead TELL me what's wrong with them and how to fix it. "The Critic may spot a badly written article in a newspaper, but does he really know how to rewrite it? if he does he should speak up with examples, if he does not he should keep shut" my viewpoint on some. While I am interested in how to make my cards better, you all only give criticism(which is good but yet bad how you all have done so far) truly if you claim to make good cards you will share your experiences, how can I learn from scorning only? Also, I don't see any formal rules, pertaining to what is and isn't acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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