ObsoleteAcc Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 ok, my newest self drawn card (and my favorite).this is neonic king, he will be part of my neonic set, and the trump card for it.the pic took 3 hours, and i like the way it came out, if u want to see the details, i am putting the pic in showcase.comments on pic appreciated more then comments on OCG lolok, here it is:[spoiler=Regular] [spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard and by Tributing 1 monster with "Neonic" in its name on your side of the Field. For every card in your hand, this card gains 300 ATK and DEF. As long as this card remains face up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards. During the End phase of each turn while this card is still face up, you must pay 1000 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. rate, comment, rep.... ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Nice self drawn picture. The effect is pretty good and is workable with. I have never seen a monster with Neonic in its name but as long as they're not too cheap, then this card is fine. You some minor OCG errors but the card great overall. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 thx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Personally I like the one that isn't holoed, the holo makes it look a bit blurry. Excellent image, I love the colors used. Speaking of that, I think it should be DARK, and maybe a Spellcaster-Type. The image doesn't really look like a Fairy-Type, or like a LIGHT monster. The OCG looks fine, only a few small errors. (tributing = Tributing / every = each / Trap cards = Trap Cards) The effect is fairly balanced, the Trap card negation effect is really what this card would be used for, making it much like Jinzo. The question is, does the high ATK make up for the fact that Jinzo doesn't require a LP payment. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 thx,i chose fairy becuz it has the fairy-ish glowy wings and glowing light blue skin.also, i need a fairy in the set ;D about OCG:need to capitalize T lolz,"every" is fine, tons of cards use that lolgonna change "Trap Cards" lol see, jinzo requires only 1 tribute to summon and hes on the field for as long as he lives, without any negatives, while mine requires a tribute and 2 cards from ur hand, and u have to pay a whole 1000 every turn or hes gone xDi might lower the stats to 2750/2750....thx for the coment! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 lol I'm right with the crop it looks much better ;)great card thought^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 PIC:10/10Effect: 9.5/10OCG :7/10 face*-*up, End *P*hase and the last effect is worded in a weird way: "During the End Phase of each turn, pay 1000 Life Points or this card is destroyed" would be way easier^^ 27.5/309,17/10 + 1 GREAT SELFDRAWN ! 10,17/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 thx guys :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 ah, NickLD, it's been a while. Time to re-rate your excellent drawn cards again only problem in the text is during your end phase when this card is face up, you should have said you MUST pay 1000 LP or this card gets destroyed 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 I absolutely love it.10/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 ah' date=' NickLD, it's been a while. Time to re-rate your excellent drawn cards again only problem in the text is during your end phase when this card is face up, you should have said you MUST pay 1000 LP or this card gets destroyed 9.8/10[/quote']lmao, i was waiting for u xD and yea, dam, i was sitting there not sure about it...i typed "must pay", then deleted it, then typed it again, then deleted it again and typed "can pay" lol. thx! :D I absolutely love it.10/10. (^_^)sweet, thx a bunch! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 please. You expected me to be rating it the moment you put up this thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Cool, Minor OCG errors, pic is pretty darn good as usual. It's great to see someone drawing thier own yu-gi-oh cards. back when I first joined I thought I was the only one. I only did two though, and I think the archives have hid them. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Self-drawn cards please me, weather they look good or not (yours looks fantastic though.) so thats a plus. Minor OCG errors: can pay - MUST pay. Destroy this card - This card is destroyed other than that, I see nothing wrong. Gratz on a great card. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 pic is pretty good for self drawn...........8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 please. You expected me to be rating it the moment you put up this thread?lolz no' date=' i just know u will eventually :D Cool, Minor OCG errors, pic is pretty darn good as usual. It's great to see someone drawing thier own yu-gi-oh cards. back when I first joined I thought I was the only one. I only did two though, and I think the archives have hid them. 9.5/10cool, thx ^_^ Self-drawn cards please me' date=' weather they look good or not (yours looks fantastic though.) so thats a plus. Minor OCG errors: can pay - MUST pay. Destroy this card - This card is destroyed other than that, I see nothing wrong. Gratz on a great card. 9.6/10[/quote']gonna fix those OCG errors,thx a bunch! :D pic is pretty good for self drawn...........8/10thx,about the -2, what is it for? how can i improve it? EDIT: UPDATED OCG and ATK/DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 to be honest I HAD been hoping for a new thread from you for a while now, all you've been doing is bumping the old ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 lol, i know, school started, i barely have any time to work on new art xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 you're not the only one in that spare time crisis situation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 I love the pic:DOCG is fine...just the effect isn't so creative..it's just a copy of few real cards effects... rate.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 you're not the only one in that spare time crisis situationlolz' date=' i know. I love the pic:DOCG is fine...just the effect isn't so creative..it's just a copy of few real cards effects... rate.8/10well half are from real cards and are pretty common, while the other 2 are pretty rare, so i think it works fine...thx for the comment ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Cool pic, really invisible at simple sight effect and really usable against my nemesis (E-Hero deck + Counter Trap Deck) 9.7/10, Something is missing here... maybe the few knowin of the "Neonic" set is what it be... Can i ask wich program you use to make em? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Cool pic' date=' really invisible at simple sight effect and really usable against my nemesis (E-Hero deck + Counter Trap Deck) 9.7/10, Something is missing here... maybe the few knowin of the "Neonic" set is what it be... Can i ask wich program you use to make em?[/quote']i use photoshop elements, 6.0you can see some other neonic monsters on my neonic monsters thread :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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