zak's#1 Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 how's this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 its way to over powered make it like lv 8 or somthing and 3000 or less atk and make an effect and no divine beast other wise the art is prety good 8/10 for art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 1 - Don't create Divine cards they are not realistic 2 - 95% of the YCM members hates normal cards and I am one of them3 - You don't written how he gains it's power4 - OCG errorsOver all: total failure 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Agree with MasteriXÂ Divine card is only at any other card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Don't make Divine cards. They are not realistic. Way to op'ed. Nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Extremely nice PIC. The rest is total rubbish, I'm afraid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 what should i rate it is a divine with no attack and a vanilla -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 A lot of people around here do not like normal monsters... I don't know why, but they don't. Avoid making Divine cards, but if you do, don't put them in the "realistic cards" section. Great picture but the name is uncreative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zak's#1 Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 well i told you guys im just a begginer and plus im only 11 yo so im just getting used to this site but i am a fanatic of yu-gi-oh cards i have most of the fire/ice based cards too, so if you dont like it then i'll try to make a better one and if you dont like that then i'll try my hardest to please you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 don't make DIVINE attributes or divine types, and it any case it needs an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zak's#1 Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 ok i changed it so if there is anything wrong tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 lower the stats and give it an effect, let's see that first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 This is the Realistic Cards section. "Monster" isn't a real type. Maybe Fiend in this case. I would lower it's ATK to at least 3000. Perhaps make a support card with it, or at least give it a decent effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 lower atk and add an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I like it the way it is. Change its type to a fiend and you should be good to go. Interesting that it is a water based fiend but I like the flavor text.  THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH NORMAL MONSTERS ie: Blue Eyes White Dragon I would recommend creating support cards for this guy 9/10.(make support and it will be 10/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 blue eyes sucks wat competitive deck today has vanila monsters? it isn't hard to add an effect like "this card gains 300 atk for every face-up WATER monster of the field" see easy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 I know of several Dragon decks that run Blue Eyes, but that isn't the point. Normal monsters have good support ie: birthright, ancient rules, skill drain, spell negation area, etc. They are part of the game and this card qualifies as "Realistic", so don't dock the guy for making a normal monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Okay at least make it a real type like fiend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Vanillas are essential in a Set! Capitalizing errors and fake types. OPed too so 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Ya why don't you make it a real type and lower attack!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Most of what i would say has been mentioned. But when making Normal monsters, the description should have no grammar errors but this does. At least the pic is good. 7/10 for a first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 R u even listening real type and Les atk!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Still say that the attack is fine, but I agree that you should change the type to Fiend. Still hoping to see some support for this guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 I suggest adding more to it name, type, and description 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 NOOO, Vanillas!OP'Dno ocg errorsThe Pic is still good though7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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