Chaos Flame Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Here´s my card. please rate and give advice.effect:This Monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 WATER Monsters in your Graveyard from play. If this card is declared as an attack target, put one Deep Counter on this card. This card gains 600 ATK for each Deep Counter on it. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your opponent´s Battle Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can remove 1 WATER Monster in your Graveyard from play to have 1 Monster your opponent controls with more ATK than this card attack this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 You could have cropped the picture a bit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Capitalize the name and you might crop the logo7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 where it says it can't be destroyed by battle i'd add that it battle damage is calculated normally"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)"it may seem small but it makes it more like other cards that have that in their effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 It's overpowered. 1000 is too much. It cannot be destroyed and you can force your opponent to attack it which will eventually make it's ATK grow way too high. Add a limit to the amount of Deep Counters placed on the card and lower the increase to about 600. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheUltimateForbiddenKing Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 yes it over power but its name is "Sacred" heheh-------no comment ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 It's overpowered. 1000 is too much. It cannot be destroyed and you can force your opponent to attack it which will eventually make it's ATK grow way too high. Add a limit to the amount of Deep Counters placed on the card and lower the increase to about 600. well actually you can only force stronger monsters to attack itso there definitely is a limit to how strong it can get Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I put that there so you couldn't force the opponents monsters to attack and suicide into it and that it made its attack limit about 1000 higher than the opponents strongest monster, oh, and I fixed the mistakes you put forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I used that pic for my Water Elemental card ;). Oh well...it's nice. You must mention the maximum amount of Deep Counters, otherwise it would become too powerful. Capitalisation is also needed: Sacred Beast of the Deep. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 It is fine the way it is. Nice drawbacks, good effects, excellent combo abilities (ring of magnatism anyone?). In my opinion you could make this card even stronger and it wouldn't be OP'ed. This card dies to lightning just like any other monster. Good pic, Good name, Excellent effectWonderful job5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I see no max number of counters, other than that it's fine 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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