etau97hi1 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 This is my first cardIF YOU CANT READ IT... During your main phase, you may special summon a level 3 or lower monster and either double its attack or count it as 2 tributes this turn. If you use this effect, you must pay 500 life points at the end phase or destroy this card. During your opponent's turn, they may discard any amount of cards form their hand and draw the same amount they discarded. If s/he uses this effect, they must pay 500 life points at their end phase. Please give me feedback and, if any, revisions.I am in need of points to participate in a contest. If you like this card, please donate 5-10 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 effect is too op'ed compared to the cost.a free monster for 500? the effect that applies to your opponent is interesting. and balances the card out a little. but the monster is too good. make the cost more. or change the effect around7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Really overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 all that for a mere 500 LP cost? That's way too powerful, give it more drawbacks 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 too OPeda good card needs a good backgroundand make the cost of your lp 10007/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 This card has no background, 500 LP is not enough. 6,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etau97hi1 Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 thanks for the edits.Trying to fix them right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 many OCG errors. and the effect seem OP's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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