dark_shadow Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 please rate but don't be to hard on me i am only a noob effect 1 tuner + one or more non tuner monsters.once per turn you can special summon in defense position 1 "carrot token" (plant-type/EARTH/level 5/ATK 200/DEF 2000)these tokens can attack but cannot be sacrificed. this card gains 1000 ATK for each "carrot token" on the field. when this card is destroyed, destroy all "carrot tokens of the field.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastermind112 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Its Nice,I like it and no worries, I'm pretty new at this 2. On a scale of one to 10...8/10...Its got a nice effect too. Its a good first card... much better than mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jtop Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 nice card may nead a new picture but over all 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_shadow Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 ya i am not so good at the picture making part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devon James Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Everythings good except for the pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinzoLord Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 jinzolord' dark-shadow hey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 it good. need a more realistic mutant. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GraveHorizon Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 My rewording:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Plant-Type monstersOnce per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Carrot Token" (Plant-Type/EARTH/Level 5/ATK 200/DEF 2000) in Defense Position. These tokens cannot be Tributed. This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Carrot Token" on the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all "Carrot Tokens" of the field. I suggest "non-Tuner Plant-Type monsters" to make it more associated with Plants. You might want to specify "cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon" if you just meant that and not by card effects. Is the image a potato with carrot arms? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 unimpressive picture, for someone so new it's still good though 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Pic is awful and there are quite a few OCG errors. It is all right for a new member though.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_shadow Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 ya i know the pic sucks and i noticed the other mistakes after i posted it i just never bothered to fix'em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakashi516 Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 your reminds me fo hungry burger a little but any way it need a lot of work but not to bad for your first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Pic is horrible but the effect is ok. An increase of 1000 per token seems a bit much.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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