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please rate but don't be to hard on me i am only a noob

 

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1 tuner + one or more non tuner monsters.

once per turn you can special summon in defense position 1 "carrot token" (plant-type/EARTH/level 5/ATK 200/DEF 2000)these tokens can attack but cannot be sacrificed. this card gains 1000 ATK for each "carrot token" on the field. when this card is destroyed, destroy all "carrot tokens of the field.[/size]

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My rewording:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Plant-Type monsters

Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Carrot Token" (Plant-Type/EARTH/Level 5/ATK 200/DEF 2000) in Defense Position. These tokens cannot be Tributed. This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Carrot Token" on the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all "Carrot Tokens" of the field.

 

I suggest "non-Tuner Plant-Type monsters" to make it more associated with Plants. You might want to specify "cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon" if you just meant that and not by card effects. Is the image a potato with carrot arms?

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