BabaXIII Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 I found some great pics from Magic cards and made these.[spoiler=Old Randoms] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhenever a Beast-Type monster is summoned, draw a card. Increase the ATK of all Beast-Type monster on the field by 400 and they gain the following effect; During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. [spoiler=New Randoms] Not sure on this one's effect.This card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by removing 4 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play. Reveil the top card of your Deck if its a DARK monster increase this card's ATK by 500 and it cannot be destroyed by battle with a LIGHT monster, this effect last only while the top card of your deck is a DARK monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzuka_masuki Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 cool 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 8/10 i like them.....Maya for Magic? still love them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 ^thanks ^^ I only took the pics, not the effects or names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonrics9601 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 cool10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 The pic are good. But you should work on OCG (But the OCG is not bad). Great ! 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 knowledge collapse is my favouritethe picture and the effect are great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 only the first card's effect is too simple all the pics look awesome 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homerjs95 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Super cool.Man your a genius 10 \ 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bangverde Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Super cool. 10 \ 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Thanks all ^^ if anybody want to help with my OCG I'd be really happyThanks all ^^ I would gladly accept any help with my OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Capitalize Graveyard and Hand. There are other small errors. But nothing big. Pics look amazing. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinzoLord Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Jinzolord'Suzuka-Masuki hey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 There are small OCG errors, but the OCG isn't awful, quite good for a new member actually. Pics look pretty damn good.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JrockerAngel7 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Like everyone else said, small OCG errors, nothing big. Your cards are pretty amazing. I enjoyed reading them. Can't pick my favorite out of all of them bc they are all very nice ^.^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 I'm really happy I finally made something people like =D Thanks for the tips on the OCG I wasn't sure if Graveyard and Hand took a capital letter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 You have quite a lot grammar issues, and OCG errors, but that's ok. The images kick ass. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Care to tell me what my errors are? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 I will try my best For this one' date=' graveyard should be Graveyard;deck is Deck [img']http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6802/316365j.jpg[/img]type in has after opponent; his/her is the way to type it i think; "Life Points by 1000 and draw 1 card..." sound better to me; Also "During each of your End Phases, you can destory this card or discard 2 cards to keep this card in play." his/her; ".....accordingly:-Level 1 to 4:-Level....so on. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhenever a Beast-Type monster is summoned, draw a card. Increase the ATK of all Beast-Type monster on the field by 400 and they gain the following effect; During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. You can probably say ".....and give them the following effect:-During the Battle Phase..." graveyard from Graveyard; 1 Crypt Counter Pick up 10 card from the top of your Deck; put a 's' behind 'Phase'; Declare 1 type; 'reveil' is spell 'reveal' but I think they say 'show it'; If you declared the card right,.......If not, skip..." this is what I see. hope I help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 =D Thank you soo much ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 UPDATED ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 for Brute of Darkness, so the 500 atk gain only lasts 1 turn right? Dragon Shaman's effect of once per duel to get a dragon monster on the field for 1 turn is UPed, maybe say once every 3 turns you can use that effect 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 The pic are again great I agree with ragnarok about the dragon shaman. Totally didn't recognized the pic for the 'Assassian' card until I say the hand. This set I give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted September 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Thanks again ^^ I first taught the Shaman was OP'ed so I tuned it down A LOT. Maybe if I make him a Tuner he should be alright? And for the Brutes the effect is only when the card on top of your deck is a DARK monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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