Double Cannon Soldier

[jayjack]

Lore

By destroying 1 monster you control, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points and 500 points of damage to your Life Points. If this card is destroyed by this effect, remove it from play.

 

This card is good in a burn deck aswell as a yubel deck. Discuss and rate :mrgreen:

[♣Cłüb $ïnïstër♣]

You dont have to use this, however, I think this sounds much more correct then you version.

 

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and pay 500 Life Points to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This this card is destroyed by this effect, it is removed from play.

 

Also it seems a little Overpowered as it just requires just 1 monster to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent which is double Cannon Soldiers effect, perhaps change it to 2.

 

7/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG Fix:

"Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and pay 500 Life Points to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by this effect, remove it from play."

 

It is OP. Its just a Cannon soldier with a higher effect damage and another drawback. You need to either make it a level 6 or 7/ decrease the effect damage delt/ tribute more monsters/ or pay more life points.

 

The picture is good (I've used it myself ^^)

 

6/10

[jayjack]

You dont have to use this' date=' however, I think this sounds much more correct then you version.

 

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and pay 500 Life Points to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This this card is destroyed by this effect, it is removed from play.

 

Also it seems a little Overpowered as it just requires just 1 monster to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent which is double Cannon Soldiers effect, perhaps change it to 2.

 

7/10

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Umm, its not really oped, since you lose lp too. And one of the main differences between this card and cannon soldier is it DESTROYS the target monster not tributes its, so it will allow cards like yubel to activate their effect.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

You dont have to use this' date=' however, I think this sounds much more correct then you version.

 

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and pay 500 Life Points to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This this card is destroyed by this effect, it is removed from play.

 

Also it seems a little Overpowered as it just requires just 1 monster to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent which is double Cannon Soldiers effect, perhaps change it to 2.

 

7/10

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Umm, its not really oped, since you lose lp too. And one of the main differences between this card and cannon soldier is it DESTROYS the target monster not tributes its, so it will allow cards like yubel to activate their effect.

 

Wrongo.

 

1)It is OP even if you lose LP

2) Destroys = Tributes =/ the only difference is Tribute is correct OCG

[jayjack]

You dont have to use this' date=' however, I think this sounds much more correct then you version.

 

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control and pay 500 Life Points to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This this card is destroyed by this effect, it is removed from play.

 

Also it seems a little Overpowered as it just requires just 1 monster to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent which is double Cannon Soldiers effect, perhaps change it to 2.

 

7/10

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Umm, its not really oped, since you lose lp too. And one of the main differences between this card and cannon soldier is it DESTROYS the target monster not tributes its, so it will allow cards like yubel to activate their effect.

 

Wrongo.

 

1)It is OP even if you lose LP

2) Destroys = Tributes =/ the only difference is Tribute is correct OCG

 

You have your opinion, i have mine. Destroys is not the same as tribute. ( http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Destroy )

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

That is for general. When a card is to have you send a card to the graveyard to achieve an effect it is proper to use Tribute not Destroy.

 

And if you cannot take helpful hints there is no point in posting your cards ^^ You can contradict us however it is wise to do so in a respectful manner and it is polite to show that you respect their comments since they are helping you.

 

Edited: A note to the contradiction thing- its fine to condradict us but if you truely believed that we are all entitled to our opinions then you would not be so eager to contradict us.

[ragnarok1945]

you mean by TRIBUTING one monster you control you inflict the 1000 burn to your opponent and 500 to yourself

 

This is just a stronger version of the original cannon soldier, which is on the Oped end already, so this is also OPed

 

7/10

[Breakaway]

I see what hes getting at so try this

 

Once per turn, Select and Destroy one monster you control (Other than this card). your opponent then takes 1000 points of direct damage. if you used this effect you take 500 points of damge during your end phase. If this card would be sestroyed it is removed from play instead.

(I know my OCG is bad(For this Effect anyways) if someone could make this better and post it for him think youll make someone happy lolz)

He probaby wants more twords this! Not your guys negitive comments lol Be positive guys guve him what he wants to hear lol

 

Overall 6.5/10 Errors:OCG, Overpowering, Ripoff lol jp

[Ultimate_Card_Kreator]

Needs to be a higher level.

7/10

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

its broken.

use it with scapegoat.

add a bigger drawback, make it a high level.

btw, as it is a cost, its a tribute.

the way you've written it anyway.

4/10

[herbie]

lol this is already a card isn't it?

and they made it lot more balanced/better than yours anyways

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

ha, forgot bout that. thats an example of balance.

[Kotaro]

As stated, it is OP and the correct OCG is Tribute not destroy.

 

Pic is ok.

 

7/10

[Sweet Lightning]

Pic is okay, but you could use it with "Scapegoat" (as stated above) to inflict some massive damage to your opponent, making it way OP'd for just a Level 4 monster. 6/10.

[BlackHaloRose]

Could First Turn Kill someone with this card. Double Cannon > Scapegoat > Double Cannon Effect X4 > Magical Stone Excavation/Spell Reproduction > Scapegoat > Double Cannon Effect X4 > GG

Picture is cool though.

And he meant destroy not tribute, which as he stated can work for cards like Yubel, basically making the card stronger than it already is.

Anything else worth suggesting has already been suggested.

 

6.5/10