Warrior of Anubis (My first card)

[Doomboi]

This is my first time making a realistic card. Even though I checked the OCG thread I still say it's bad. Any comments please?

 

EDIT: Forgot the image credits:

~Vas-co of Deviantart

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

well. ill give you the downlow.

the ocg is fine, but the effect is bland. its too simple. and not very unique. but your new

the picture has been used before, but your new, so you wouldnt know that

overall, the card is a little too simple, add some more unique effects.

but this is good for your first card.

8/10

[Moonlight Princess]

Good for a first try. Effect is a bit bland.. Picture is overused, (I used it as well ^.^)

Here is an OCG check: When this card is destroyed as a result of Battle, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Other than that great card 9/10 =)

[ĎλЯклξššζ]

Its very good........... 10/10

[Neo-MasterX]

you know I HATE ANUBIS with my life

but this card is really good for your first realistic card

8/10

[Ultimate_Card_Kreator]

The effect is tooo simple. I've seen lvl 2 monsters with this effect.

But it's an ok card none the less.

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

pic is starting to get overused, the effect is also too simple so you should add another

 

Still reasonable for early cards though

 

8/10

[Kotaro]

OCG has been fixed but the effect is a bit boring, try adding another effect to it.

 

The pic is overused

 

7.5/10

[§hadow §triker]

nice 1st try

now here is the criticism:

overused image

effect is too simple, try to spruce it up

OCG is a bit off

pretty much it...

[jaster_rogue]

the pic is Overused, and the effect is too simple

but it's not bad

8/10