sasuke wesker Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 :D ok so this is the first card i made pls be kind im new to this site but give fair ratings please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 8.5/10 Nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 It's quite nice. :) Better then alot of firsts. Fix: Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. I think that's about right. It's relatively simple, though it is your first, so I am sure you will begin to develop and create something more advanced. To be hontest, it seems a little powerful though. I would restrict the type of monster you can destroy. For example: Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Level 4 or below monster your opponent controls. Overall, not bad for a first: 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Very good for first card 8/10. It seems a bit overpowered for me though...try...destroy one monster your opponent controls who's level is equal or uder the level of your tributed monster. That should settle it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 alright picture and good efect 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 this is the fixed version thank you to all who pointed out errors please point out any more i may have missed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 very good for a new member, I'm feeling Kind today, and your card is really good :D, so...9/10good job ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 You can make it "level 4 or lower", instead of spelling out four. Awesome card. 9.5/10. Good for a first card, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosferatu Reaper Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 good pic but the effect still looks too powerful8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 umm 9/10 but why is the "of" capitalized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vtr47 Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 very good card for a newcomer 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 bump yet again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke wesker Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 bump!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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