faheemrcc Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 I know its kinda lame but its my first one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 its not too bad an effort. ocg is ok, just need to capitalise certain words.the card is a bit on the op'ed side. maybe remove the summon effect or the destroy effect?otherwise, good job for your first card and welcome to YCM :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 OCG is a bit off, but completely good for a first try, maybe you should make it a continuous spell, other than that welcome to YCM! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 this should last more than just 1 turn on the field, make it a continuous spell instead and you're good to go 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 OCG has some flaws, pic and effect are OK. Congrats on your first card!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 For a new member, this is not bad. The OCG is not awful, juts lots of capitalization errors, which will disappear over time. The pic is not bad at all, the effect is also pretty good.A good effort.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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