Yusei Fudou Posted December 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Episode 6: Another Love Game?! Mare vs. Veronica! Domino City Alleys - 11:00 PM Mare: Ladies first.Veronica: Hehe, sure, why not? *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* I summon my Vampire Lady! (Vampire Lady|4|1550|1550|Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent’s Life Points, declare 1 card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap). Your opponent selects 1 card of that type from his/her Deck and sends it to the Graveyard.) And I will set 1 face-down card, then end my turn..Mare: *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* Alright, I summon my Dark Spirit - Kazoashi. (Dark Spirit - Kazoashi|4|1700|1200|If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy it immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation. Any card that is sent to the graveyard by this card's effect is removed from play instead.) Next, I will attack your Vampire Lady with my Kazoashi...Veronica: Hehehe, we vampires drain power! And this is what I'm going to do to your Kazoashi! I activate my Draining Shield! (Draining Shield|Normal Trap|Negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the attacking monster's ATK.) First, it'll add its attack points to my life points, then it will negate the attack!LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 9700 (Veronica)Mare: Hm. I send 1 face-down card and end my turn.Veronica: Hehehe, great! *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Alright, now I will tribute my Vampire Lady in order to summon... Vampire Lord! (Vampire Lord|5|2000|1500|Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, declare 1 card type (Monster, Spell or Trap). Your opponent selects 1 card of that type of his/her Deck and sends it to the Graveyard. Also, when this card is destroyed and sent to your Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, it is Special Summoned to the field during your next Standby Phase.) Now, Vampire Lord! Attack his Kazoashi! Mare: Pft, you won't attack my monster that easily. I activate my face-down Trap Card, Dark Guardian Spirit. (Dark Guardian Spirit|Normal Trap|You can only activate this card when your opponent attacks a 'Dark Spirit' monster. Discard 2 'Dark Spirit' monsters from your deck to negate the attack. This card stays on your side of the field until the end of the Battle Phase. If your opponent attacks again while this card is face-up on the field, you can remove from play 2 'Dark Spirit' monsters in your graveyard to negate the attack.) Let me remind you of its effect, by discarding 2 Dark Spirits from my deck I can negate your attack. And I will choose Dark Spirit - Okaizome and Dark Spirit - Heikagai.. Veronica: Hmph, you just survived it this turn! Anyways, I'll set a face-down card and end my turn!Mare: *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Alright, now I will tribute my Dark Spirit - Kazoashi, in order to summon this! Dark Spirit - Kuuro! (Dark Spirit - Kuuro|6|2300|1900|This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is Tribute Summoned by tributing a "Dark Spirit" monster, you can Normal Summon an additional time this turn. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation.) And as you know my Kuuro's effect, if I summon it tributing a Dark Spirit, I can tribute summon again this turn. I summon another Dark Spirit - Kazoashi! Next, I will attack your Vampire Lord with my Kuuro.. go!LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 9400 (Veronica)Mare: Kazoashi, attack her directly..LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 7700 (Veronica)Veronica: *grins and looks at Mare* You're still skilled, Marey.. I promise you, when we become both vampires, we'll have immortal love..Mare: I'm afraid that won't happen. Veronica: *deep laugh* You will lose to me..Mare: Even if so, there's something you must know by now.. I don't love you anymore.Veronica: *gets shocked and opens eyes wide* What are you talking about?! Has Jerry Oldmaster brainwashed you like he did to Cindy?!Mare: Jerry has nothing to deal with any chaos going on here.. he has got a brother to save, and he has got an experience training to improve his job. What you and the other agents did is just silly... Veronica: Ugh, well why are you being so nice to him if there's nobody darker than you on planet Earth?!Mare: Mr. Vampyre fed you up with ideas, that any dark person can do, and here's why I don't love you: You're too selfish to fall in his ideas. I never liked selfish people and people who risk their lives for relationships, those are just dogs and puppies that think love is ever going to make them superior. I don't need love anymore.Veronica: Mare.. try to understand me! I'm doing this all for your sake!Mare: *deep laugh* Veronica: What?! This is a serious moment, Mare! I mean it!Mare: Really? If you're that serious, *deep laughs* then aren't you smart enough to figure out that Mr. Vampyre is just using you to add me into his army... Veronica: I don't care about Mr. Vampyre! I'm doing this for you!Mare: Has anybody ever told you.. 'I don't need your help'? *deep laugh* Yes! I don't need your help, you selfish puppy!Veronica: Mare.. *tears fall from her eyes* How could you... he really brainwashed you..Mare: Really, brainwashed me? You just said before a moment that I'm the darkest person on Planet Earth.. *deep laugh* You're stupid. I can kill you if I wanted to.. *raises a katana* I don't care about you anymore.. you're just another puppy.. Veronica: MARE! I loved you.. and I still do!Mare: Congratulations.. you reached the last level of your seflishness. Veronica: Grr! How could you, you piece of jerk! What feelings do you have?!Mare: Pity, pity and pity. It's the 8th deadly sin in my opinion.Veronica: Ughh... I hate you, Mare Octavius! Mare: The feeling's mutual. Anyways, I end my turn.Veronica: *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Yes! *deep laugh* I will revenge from you, first, I will activate my Spell Card Premature Burial! (Premature Burial|Equip Spell|Pay 800 life points. Select 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard, Special Summon it on the field in face-up Attack Position, and equip it with this card. When this card is destroyed, the monster is also destroyed.) By using this spell card, I can return back a monster from my graveyard by just paying 800 Life Points, and I return back my Vampire Lord!LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 6900 (Veronica)Veronica: But that isn't all, because now I'll remove from play my Vampire Lord.. in order to Special Summon this great monster! Vampire Genesis! (Vampire Genesis|8|3000|2100|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Vampire Lord" on your side of the field from play. Discard 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to select and Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard with a Level less than the discarded Zombie-Type monster. You can only use this effect once per turn.) Hahaha! Feel the power of my Vampire Genesis!---Domino City Alleys, North Streets - 11:20 PMJason: Taxi! A taxi stops for Jerry and JasonJerry: Alright, let's go!Jason: Yeah.. *gets in along with Jerry and Jason, but the driver seems to be a vampire*Jerry: Jason, do your work! Defeat him!Jason: Oi! *jumps on the vampire driver and kicks him out*Jerry: I didn't mean.. physically.. ^^;Jason: Whatever, I always wanted to drive a taxi! *closes the door and drives the cab madly*Jerry: Jjjaaaaaaaaaasoooooooooooooon!!!---Veronica: Alright now, Genesis, attack his selfish Kuuro!Mare: Hmph.LP Count: 7300 (Mare) - 6900 (Veronica)Veronica: After that, I'll end my turn..Mare: *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Alright, I will tribute my Dark Spirit - Kazoashi to set a face-down monster. Then I end my turn.Veronica: Big deal! *draws a card and looks at it (3 cards in hand)* Alright, I will play with my Vampire Lady! Next, I will attack your face-down monster with it!Mare: I reveal my Dark Spirit - Defendomi! (Dark Spirit - Defendomi|6|1400|2600|This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, if this card would be attacked by a card that has higher ATK than the DEF of this card, this card is not destroyed as a result of battle.) LP Count: 7300 (Mare) - 5850 (Veronica)Veronica: Ughh, Genesis, attack his Defendomi!Genesis attacks but Defendomi stays on the fieldVeronica: H-Huh?! What's going on?! Mare: It's my Defendomi's special effect.. once per turn when it's attacked by a card that has higher DEF than its, it's not destroyed as a result of battle.Veronica: Hmph, I end my turn!Mare: Alright, *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* It's the time now.. hmm... alright, I will reveal my face-down Trap Card! Return of the Dark Spirit! (Return of the Dark Spirit|Normal Trap|Select 1 "Dark Spirit" monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it. The monster's effect is negated and it cannot attack the turn it's Special Summoned. The summoned monster cannot be offered as a tribute for a Tribute Summon except for a "Dark Spirit" monster. Destroy the summoned card at your 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation.) And I will return back my Kuuro! But I will immediately tribute it along with my Defendomi in order to summon this! Dark Spirit King Kuriwikioh! (Dark Spirit King Kuriwikioh|8|3000|2800|You can treat this card's summon as a Special Summon if you're tributing 2 'Dark Spirit' monsters. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn this card is Special Summoned. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation. As long as there's another 'Dark Spirit' monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. If you have 7 or more 'Dark Spirit' monsters in your graveyard while this card is face-up on the field, decrease your Life Points by 800 at each Standby Phase of yours.) Now, we're equal by monsters, but not by life points.. and I'll show you what I mean.. I activate my Okaizome's special ability. You do know it well, ex-partner.. (3000 damage, since there's 6 monsters: 1x Defendomi, 2x Kazoashi, 1x Heikagai, 1x Okaizome, 1x Kuuro)LP Count: 7300 (Mare) - 2850 (Veronica)Mare: *deep laugh* You'll see real pain, puppy.. Kuriwikioh! Attack her Vampire Lady! LP Count: 7300 (Mare) - 1400 (Veronica)Veronica: Ughh.. the game was in my hands..Mare: Not my fault. I end my turn.Veronica: *draws a card and looks at it (3 cards in hand)*I will summon my Blood Sucker! (Blood Sucker|4|1300|1500|Each time you inflict Battle Damage on your opponent with this card, the top card of your opponent's Deck is sent to the Graveyard.) Mare: Hehehe, what a little 'sucker'.Veronica: Hmph! You'll see! Vampire Genesis, attack Kuriwikioh!Mare: (Yeah, good one.. *looks at Premature Burial in his hand* but I've already planned for it) Veronica: Blood Sucker! Attack directly!LP Count: 6000 (Mare) - 1400 (Veronica)Veronica: When Blood Sucker inflicts damage to your Life Points, you must discard the top card of your deck!Mare: *discards the top card of his deck*Veronica: And now, I end my turn!---Domino City - DCEO Parking - 11:50 PMJerry: Jassooonnn!! Stop driving madly like that!Jason: We're here! Alright, let's go now!Jerry: Yeah.. *holds Cindy on his shoulders and runs with Jason* Jason, slow down.. I have Cindy on my shoulder.. hf, hf.. why don't you walk like emos?!Jason: Because Cindy isn't awake!Jerry: Wha?!DCEO - Laboratory:Jerry: Here she is, James.. I hope you can find a medicine for this..James: A vampire bite, eh?Jason: Yes..James: Who bit her?Jerry: Jason!James: Jason? A vampire?Jerry: Uhh.. it's a long story..Chris: Well, he's an emo... fangs..Everybody sweat dropsChris: Hah.. sorry ^^;---Domino City Alleys - 12:00 AMMare: Alright, it's my turn. *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Now, I will activate my spell card, Premature Burial! By paying 800 Life Points, I'll resurrect my Kuriwikioh.LP Count: 5200 (Mare) - 1400 (Veronica)Veronica: What?! Impossible!Mare: Yes, it's possible. That's why I'm the top agent of DCEO.. I play the right cards at the right time. Kuriwikioh, finish her and her Blood Sucker!LP Count: 5200 (Mare) - 0 (Veronica)Veronica: No way! *turns back into a human* You don't want me.. *looks down on the ground* But because I will always love you, and I will work by your advice to prove it.. I will never rely on love in my life.. *tears falls from her eyes* Mare: Silly you. I was just trying to let you forget that idea *opens his arms* Come here now..Veronica: R-Really?Mare: Yeah.. Veronica runs to Mare's arms and he hugs her.. Mare: You know I missed you..Veronica: I missed you too, Mare.. you don't know how horrible it is for me..Mare: I know.. Mr. Vampyre comes out of his bat form which has been watching the whole duel and heads towards Mare and VeronicaMr. Vampyre: I'm sorry to interrupt this emotional moment.. but I think it's pay time for finishing off all my soldiers, hmm? To Be ContinuedNext Episode (7): Mr. Vampyre vs. Mare! The Midnight Duel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 madly good. as ever. :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 madly good. as ever. :). I second that, great job Mare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 ^I am really a fan of character love, ain't I? xD And thanks. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Alright, this is to bump this fanfic and revive it. T_T Special Episode: Interview with the DCEO! Interviewer: And today on The Early Early Early Saturday Dawn Show, we'll interview one of the most important and protecting organizations of Domino City! The Duel-Crime Extermination Organization!Interviewer 2: Do you think anyone is watching us now?Interviewer: Nuh uh, not even businessmen... ---Interviewer: Now we're in front of the DCEO, and it seems cold.. BRR... Interviewer 2: Yeah, well what do you think the weather will be in December at 5:00 AM?!Interviewer: Good point >_>Mr. Theasius: Brr... welcome to DCEO.. come in..---Interviewer: Wow, this place looks cool!Cindy: Yeah! ^_^ Our DCEO is always cool, in the winter and the summer!Chris: Just like you, sweetie!Cindy: PERVERT!!! *hits Chris with purse*Interviewer: Was that filmed?Cameraman: Duh, we're still on air..Interviewer: Oh, uh, erm-- so we see the DCEO full of life! Except there's 2 dead guys standing on the wall... they seem too silent, would you introduce us to yourselves? *points the microphone to Mare*Mare: Pft. It's Mare.Interviewer: Oo, you look like Uchiha Sasuke! Silent and g--Mare: Ahem. Excuse me, gonna vomit. *walks to bathroom* I'm allergic to anime-gays.Interviewer: Alright, and you are...?Jason: Jason's my name... and I'm so lame...Interviewer: Another Uchiha Sasuke.. you are an emo, eh?Jason: I'm allergic to anime-gays too. *goes to vomit*Interviewer: Oh well! Seems these guys are really silent, and Sasuke'd..Gets a katana thrown near himInterviewer: Woops.. ^^; Now we'll talk to Veronica.Veronica: Oh, hi, I'm the ex-partner of Mare Octavius--Interviewer: Who's the new one?!Veronica: Jerry Oldmaster.Interviewer: *runs to Jerry*Veronica: (Why did I open my mouth?!)Jerry: Oh ^^; Hi.. my name's Jerry Oldmaster, I'm from Holland, and well uhh.. I used to work in Russia.. Interviewer: You're the partner of Mare Octavius?Jerry: Yeah.Interviewer: *whispers* Tell me, does he like flowers?Jerry: Uhmm, tell me what's your sexual orientation please?Interviewer: Uhm, I assume that it is not heterosexual..Jerry: *green face* I'm going to the bathroom, for a minute..Interviewer: And you are?Cindy: Cindy Starr! Oh, oh, by the way you're gay do you have any Yaoi?Interviewer: A LOT!Cindy: Ohh! *hugs interviewer* Gimme some?Interviewer: ^^; HeheJerry, Josh, Chris: Oh.. my.. god. Thy End of Interview Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 O_O Now that was...awkward and kinda creepy *shrugs* But atill, funny as heck mare, nice job +1rep for ya mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 ^Yay, thanks. =P I don't know but I guess I turned rep hungry. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Episode 7: Mr. Vampyre vs. Mare! The Midnight Duel! Domino City Alleys - 12:10 AMMare: You're so not forgiven.Mr. Vampyre: Hahaha, yeah, whatever. Without any intros, I think we shall duel now... you seem like an interesting soldier for my army.Mare: *laughs deeply* Your.. army?Mr. Vampyre: Yes, what's making you laugh? Maybe you've become crazy after seeing so much people getting into my army, huh?Mare: Oh, I thought you were the crazy one... your vampire soldiers are all weak, and none of them are challenging, so I'm guessing you're the same as your soldiers..Veronica: No, Mare! He's strong.. he defeated me and Jason and all of these duelists who became his army!Mare: And I defeated them all, too... even you and Jason. *raises his thumb up to Veronica* I'll beat him for ya, babe..Veronica: *smiles and looks at Mare* I'm sure you will..Mr. Vampyre: I'm sorry, but I've got a date to follow too.. so let's hurry up with this, don't you agree? *standbys his duel disk and draws 5 cards*Mare: For once, I agree with you. *standbys his duel disk and draws 5 cards* Mr. Vampyre: Alright then. *draws a card and looks at it* Hmm, this guy will do it. I summon Zombie Master! (Zombie Master|4|1800|0|Once per turn, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type Monster from either player's Graveyard.) And then I'll activate his effect, by discarding Pyramid Turtle from my hand, then I can summon it! (Pyramid Turtle|4|1200|1400|When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster with 2000 or less DEF from your Deck.) Then, I'll end my turn.Mare: Not bad. *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* Alright then, I'll summon my Dark Spirit - Tsukurowan. (Dark Spirit - Tsukurowan|4|1900|1000|When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, you can discard 1 card from your hand in order to add 1 "Dark Spirit" monster from your deck to your hand.) And I will activate its special effect. By discarding 1 card from my hand, I can add 1 Dark Spirit monster from my deck to my hand. *discards Dark Spirit - Okaizome* And I'll add my Dark Spirit King - Kuriwikioh to my hand. Next, I will set 1 face-down card and attack your Zombie Master with my Tsukurowan!LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 7900 (Mr. Vampyre)Mr. Vampyre: Hehehe, interesting..Mare: It will become more than that soon. I end my turn.Mr. Vampyre: Well, I'm afraid I'll have to stop that, don't you agree? *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Alright then, there goes my first step in stopping it. I'll summon another Zombie Master! But that isn't all, I'll activate its effect again to discard my Master Kyonshee.. and summon it! (Master Kyonshee|4|1750|1000) Mare: I don't see how are you going to ever defeat my Tsukurowan with these crap monsters?Mr. Vampyre: I'll defeat him with the weakest.. hehehe, just watch. Pyramid Turtle, attack Tsukurowan!Mare: *sweat drop*LP Count: 8000 (Mare) - 7400 (Mr. Vampyre) Mr. Vampyre: Look at what my Pyramid Turtle can do! I activate its effect, when it's destroyed I can summon a Zombie from my deck with 2000 DEF or less... go, summon Ryu Kokki! (Ryu Kokki|6|2400|2000|If a monster that battles with this monster is a Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster, destroy that monster at the end of the Damage Step.) And now, Ryu Kokki, destroy his Tsukurowan!LP Count: 7500 (Mare) - 7400 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: Nice.Mr. Vampyre: Now, Master Kyonshee, Zombie Master... attack directly! LP Count: 3950 (Mare) - 7400 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: Ugh.. not bad at all.Mr. Vampyre: Hehehe, I've heard that a lot. Well now, I guess I'll end my turn.Mare: Hmph. *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Alright then, I will reveal my face-down card.. Return of the Dark Spirit. (Return of the Dark Spirit|Normal Trap|Select 1 "Dark Spirit" monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it. The monster's effect is negated and it cannot attack the turn it's Special Summoned. The summoned monster cannot be offered as a tribute for a Tribute Summon except for a "Dark Spirit" monster. Destroy the summoned card at your 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation.) And I will return my Tsukurowan. Mr. Vampyre: Hehehe, your Tsukurowan is no match for my Zombie army.Mare: Army.. *deep laugh* You make me laugh.Mr. Vampyre: Hey, don't you think I'm a dreamer about making armies.. I made a lot and I'm older than you and everybody in this world...Mare: What do you mean you're older?Mr. Vampyre: I've been alive for hundreds of years. During the medieval age, I formed my own military army, and I attacked a lot of small villages and conquered them.. however, the Europeans knew about it, and they sent their troops to free the village and demolish my small empire. They successfully did, and they killed all of my troops until I escaped and lost them, and in a cave.. I found a spellbook of immortality and power.. and I read its spells until I was cursed the curse of a vampire. The light was going to kill me, so I took a tomb from there and slept in it... until I woke up and I became the wandering Mr. Vampyre. Mare: Hehehe, so you're a loser even in your past..Mr. Vampyre: Shut up! This really affects my feelings!Mare: *deep laugh* Even with your high dueling skills, you don't deserve to be my rival..Mr. Vampyre: What are you talking about?! I deserve to be more than just your rival..Mare: Actually, you deserve to be my dog.. if we're going to be compared by the rate of our darkness. You have a lot of feelings, and your comebacks are weak like you..Mr. Vampyre: I'm not weak! Actually, all of our bad memories make monsters out of us! No one is just dark for no reason!Veronica: T-That's true..Mare: That's true, for most of the people. However, there are a few people who are dark by themselves, are naturally born dark. Just like me *deep laugh* and I don't mean pretenders or cosplayers, I mean really dark, just as you can see my darkness... I've killed a lot, and in fact *deep laugh* killing and humiliating people is my pleasure!Mr. Vampyre: You're insane! Mare: I've heard that from many people... I don't really care. All I care about is having pleasure doing these stuff.Mr. Vampyre: Grr..Mare: Oh, right, where was I? It was my turn.. alright then.. I will summon my Dark Spirit - Okaizome. (Dark Spirit - Okaizome|4|1500|1000|You can remove this card in your graveyard from play in order to decrease your opponent's Life Points by the number of "Dark Spirit" monsters in your graveyard x500.) Next, I will tribute them to summon my Dark Spirit King - Kuriwikioh! (Dark Spirit King Kuriwikioh|8|3000|2800|You can treat this card's summon as a Special Summon if you're tributing 2 'Dark Spirit' monsters. You cannot Normal Summon or Set this turn after this card is Special Summoned. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation. As long as there's another 'Dark Spirit' monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. If you have 7 or more 'Dark Spirit' monsters in your graveyard while this card is face-up on the field, decrease your Life Points by 800 at each Standby Phase of yours.) Hehehe, seems I will defeat your Zombie 'army' with this! Alright then, Kuriwikioh, attack his Ryu Kokki!LP Count: 3950 (Mare) - 6900 (Mr. Vampyre)Mr. Vampyre: My god.. this is unbelievable... how did you even summon two monsters in a single turn?Mare: It's simple... my Kuriwikioh's effect makes its summon like a Special Summon if I'm tributing 2 Dark Spirits for it..Mr. Vampyre: Hmph..Mare: After that, I'll set a face-down card and end my turn.Mr. Vampyre: *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Hehehe, this will give me some chance... I'll activate Nightmare's Steelcage! (Nightmare's Steelcage|Normal Spell|This card remains face-up on the field for 2 of your opponent's turns. No monsters can attack. Destroy this card during your opponent's 2nd End Phase after this card was activated.) A wide thorned steel cage is around Mare and his monster.Mr. Vampyre: And now, I'll change my Kyonshee and Zombie Master to Defense Mode. Then, I'll end my turn!Mare: *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* OK then, I'll summon my Dark Spirit - Kazoashi! (Dark Spirit - Kazoashi|4|1700|1200|If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy it immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation. Any card that is sent to the graveyard by this card's effect is removed from play instead.) Kazoashi, attack Master Kyonshee! Mr. Vampyre: Hmph..Mare: Kuriwikioh, attack his Zombie Master! After this, I end my turn.Mr. Vampyre: *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Hehehe, I will activate my Premature Burial! (Premature Burial|Equip Spell|Pay 800 Life Points. Select 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard, Special Summon it on the field in face-up Attack Position, and equip it with this card. When this card is destroyed, the monster is also destroyed.) By paying 800 life points, I can resurrect a monster from my graveyard! I bring back my Ryu Kokki! LP Count: 3950 (Mare) - 6100 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: You wasted your card, my Kuriwikioh is way stronger.---DCEO Medical Rooms - 12:45 AMJames: Welcome Dr. Helen, I'm sorry to wake you up at this time but we have an emergency here.Dr. Helen: What kind of emergency, Mr. Techy?James: Lack of blood, I think. Cindy was bitten by a vampire.Dr. Helen: Are you kidding? Vampire bite?James: It's by Mr. Vampyre and his vampires.Dr. Helen: Oh, I've heard the news. I need the Protolline needle, quick!James: Chris, bring it quickly!Chris: Roger!Jerry: Will she be OK, Dr. Helen?Dr. Helen: Hopefully yes.---Domino City Alleys - 12:47 AMMr. Vampyre: Remember when I made fun of your Tsukurowan? Alright, call this Deja Vu, but on my side this time! I'll tribute my Ryu Kokki in order to summon this! Ryu Kokking, King of Skulls! (Ryu Kokking, King of Skulls|8|3000|2600|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be only Special Summoned by tributing 1 face-up "Ryu Kokki" on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand in order to destroy 1 Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster on the field. You can remove 1 "Ryu Kokki" in your Graveyard from play in order to add 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand.) Said something about rivalry? Muwhahahaha! Veronica: It's the same monster that defeated me! Mare: Nice monster.Mr. Vampyre: Ryu Kokking, attack his selfish Kazoashi!LP Count: 2650 (Mare) - 6100 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: HmphMr. Vampyre: I know, you're the greatest duelist I've ever faced this night... but I promise you, you'll have a high place in my army! Muwhahahahahaha! Mare: (You wish..) To Be Continued Next Episode (8): Divine Evolution Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 nice ep man, this fanfic just keeps getting better and better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Superb as ever :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Episode 8: Divine Evolution Domino City Alleys - 12:56 AMMare: So it's my turn then! *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Hmm, this is quite good. First, I'll summon my Dark Spirit - Okaizome! (Dark Spirit - Okaizome|4|1500|1000|You can remove this card in your graveyard from play in order to decrease your opponent's Life Points by the number of "Dark Spirit" monsters in your graveyard x500.) Then, I will activate my Premature Burial. By paying 800 Life Points, I can resurrect a monster from my graveyard, and I choose my Kazoashi.Mr. Vampyre: What a pathetic monster.. that is no match for Ryu Kokking!LP Count: 1850 (Mare) - 6100 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: But now, it's time for your Ryu Kokking to see its ultimate rival! I tribute my Kuriwikioh, Okaizome and Kazoashi, to Special Summon my Dark Spirit God - Kurikigami! (Dark Spirit God - Kurikigami|10|4000|4000|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 "Dark Spirit" monsters on your side of the field. This card is unaffected by Trap Cards in the turn it's Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by Normal and Continuous Spell Cards. You may decrease this card's Attack Points by 1000 in order to destroy 1 card on the field. If you activate this effect, you cannot declare an attack this turn. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, remove the attacked monster from play without Damage Calculation.) Mr. Vampyre: What.. what is this monster? It looks a lot like Kuriwikioh.. e-except.. it's darker, and it's greater...Mare: Yes. My Kuriwikioh has evolved into this great god, the god of Dark Spirits - Kurikigami! This is what I call... the Divine Evolution!Mr. Vampyre: Grr.. that was just out of your luck!Mare: No.. Dark Spirits are special monsters, more than you think. They serve whoever is darker, and slay those light wimps that try to possess their powers. For ages, people tried to gain this great dark power, but none of them knew that it only served the dark ones, the really dark ones. A lot of people have been put under social and physical humiliation from these monsters, and they awaited the destined child to be born, who could lead them and the darkness in the way to humiliate these posers, punish those who ever though they are dark but they're not, and those who tried to be dark so they can achieve ultimate power! Darkness will punish those who pretend to be dark! And there's the right leader for the Dark Spirits!Veronica: M-Mare... no way..Mr. Vampyre: Who is supposed to be their leader?! Is it you?!Mare: Well, now you have guessed it... you little poser! I'll show you the power of my Dark Spirits! *a black aura surrounds Mare* Kurikigami, annihilate his pathetic king of skulls!LP Count: 1850 (Mare) - 5100 (Mr. Vampyre)Mr. Vampyre: *holds his heart* What is this?! Ughh, all of my body hurts, my mind, my heart, why am I getting physical pain?!Mare: Do not EVER underestimate the powers of my Dark Spirits! Besides their dueling powers, and that they're invincible, they have more power than you can imagine!Mr. Vampyre: But... I am Mr. Vampyre... I'm dark!Mare: Stop pretending! With all the power of my Dark Spirits, avenging for their defeat, I will activate my first Okaizome's effect! I'll remove it from play from my graveyard, dealing you 3000 points of damage! LP Count: 1850 (Mare) - 2100 (Mr. Vampyre)Mare: And my second Okaizome will take the next job! 2500 points of damage!Suddenly, Mr. Vampyre looks and sees nothing, but him on a dark ground, with sky red and black, then sees the Dark Spirits he destroyed surrounding him, looking at him hatefully, and hears Mare's voice from the skyMare's Voice: Welcome to your own hell! I will make sure you'll never go out!The Dark Spirits turn into soldiers, and Kuriwikioh turns into the leader of the European army that defeated him long agoArmy Leader: You're defeated again, Vampyre... you'll never make it, you'll never succeed!The army with the leader laughs, and they are all chucking and looking at him, getting closer and closerMr. Vampyre: No! NO! NO! Mare's Voice: You'll never exit your nightmare! You will pay for all you've done! Mr. Vampyre: Please! Have mercy... Mare's Voice: DIE!Mr. Vampyre: No.. NO.. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!Mr. Vampyre gets caught by the army, and a carnage is created by them, slaying him ferociously.. --DCEO Medical Center - 1:10 AM Jason: Dr. Helen, is Cindy okay?Dr. Helen: Seems so. Dark blood in her is curing every single scar and pain that has been caused by the vampire!Jerry: What?! James: That's scientifically impossible!Dr. Helen: I agree, Mr. Techy. Her body could be a new generation of human evolution, if I was just allowed to do some tests on her--Jerry: Shut up!Dr. Helen: That wasn't very polite, Mr. Oldmaster...Jerry: I said, shut up! No one will do tests or anything on my love's body! She was never a test rat, and she isn't, and never will be! *smiles* But, I know what's the cause of this, or shall I say "who"? Dr. Helen: Excuse me, what are you talking about?Jerry: This dark blood is only a gift from a friend, *closes his eyes* (Thank you, Mare..)--Domino City Alleys - 1:15 AMMare: Now, my Okaizome has defeated you. Pay for the pretending you've done, and the stupid things you've done to people! *raises his katanas*Veronica: No, Mare! Don't do it! I don't want to see this carnage!Mare: Then, you can look away. Veronica: *looks away and closes her eyes* (I just hope you stop being a sadist, Mare..)Mare: Pay time! *raises his katanas high then starts to cut parts of the body, and the zoom-out of the alleys are shown (PREVENTING VIOLENT SCENES)*An insane scream heard from Mr. Vampyre has echos in the alleys, and Mare is heard shouting "You will pay hard!"---DCEO Medical Rooms - 11:00 AMJerry: Cindy, are you alright?Cindy: Yes, I'm fine. ^^ I'm glad you're here with me. Dr. Helen said that I will be able to get out of the bed tomorrow.Jerry: By the way, Cindy.. *shy face*Cindy: What, Jerry? ^^Jerry: Here, I want to give you this.. *picks up Lightning Vortex from his pocket* A dear person gave it to me.. I think it should be yours now, as a gift from me. Cindy hugs Jerry, and Jerry seems very shyCindy: I love you, Jerry.. Jerry: ^^ I love you, too..Jason: Chris, give me a high five for our newest failure in getting Cindy.Chris: SureJason and Chris: Failure!Veronica: *opens the door* Guys, you won't believe what happened yesterday night..Jason: I know, Mare defeated Mr. Vampyre and cut him into pieces. As ever, that guy likes 'cutting' a lot.Veronica: Well, yes he did! But that isn't the only thing he's done that duel... he summoned a new god, called Kurikigami. He's also turned weird after it, and he called himself the leader of Dark Spirits. He also had a dark aura surrounding him!The crowd laughsChris: Alright, Veron, Mare is weird, dark and lonely, but not the leader of Dark Spirits, and all this stuff, and magical auras or whatever. I think you're suffering mentally from the vampire bite.. Veronica: I'm not mentally suffering! And never ever call me Veron!Chris: Sure, Veron. ;)Veronica: Grr... *gets mad and punches Chris in the face* IDIOT!Chris: *fell on the ground* Do you know you look beautiful when angry?Veronica: You pervert..Jerry: Well, ya know, Veronica, I think I believe you. ^^ A miracle happened that way.Veronica: You really do?Jerry: Technically, yeah. Cindy, excuse me for a minute, gotta see someone quickly.Cindy: Don't be late, 'hon. Jerry: Don't worry, I won't.. ^^ *leaves his hands from holding Cindy's, and places the Lightning Vortex card in her hand, then goes out of the medical room..* (Wow, she called me hon. Anyways, it's time to see who saved my girlfriend..) Jerry walks into the medical hallway, and finds Mare standing besides a wall, looking away Jerry: Hey, Mare..Mare: Aye.Jerry: Just wanted to say thanks, for what you've done to Cindy.Mare: No problem. *shows a thumbs up to Jerry* Jerry: (I guess even the leader of Dark Spirits can be nice.. ^^) Yeah.Cindy: Jerry! Come here, Chris has started flirting!Jerry: Gotta go.. for my girlfriend! *goes running to the room* Chris, I'll kill you!Mare: Veronica, I've seen you.Veronica: Yeah, well, I was scared last night.Mare: Come here.. *opens his arms* you won't be scared. *hugs Veronica* Next Episode (9): Famous + Bully = Arrogant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Awesome.Dammit. I must throw some variation in here, I mean, I can just record "awesome" somewhere and put it in a loop, but that wouldn't be nice XD I love the "I love you" part :)^ sounds pretty odd ^ And I lol at the next episode's title :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 woah, nice episode Mare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 I personally think my Tragic Hero personality rocks. And guess what, I may post Episode 9 today. =P If you want a sneak peek, check out the two arrogant characters in the first post. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 I don't understand why Sander an I are the only ones posting here! :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ^Because... people of YCM care only about Duel Academy and little hero fanfics. And they hate me. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 But you are the best fanficer around here :|So I don't get why.And, you're part of the Meanieness Brotherhood :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ^Meanienees! HAIL! xD Best fanficer? Nooo, after Remix.. XD (sarcasm wins ;)) They probably ignore my fanfic because they don't find no Duel Academy or Jaden in it. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Pretty good fan-fic I like it can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Maybe you can try changing the title? Like Slime did with his Deck, he said it was his E-Hero build, but it was his normal Deck and everyone commented XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ive only read the 1st chapter, (not enough spare time) but yeah, really good and creative ideas, yea like u said, (alot like my fanfic) no ones bothered in it because it doesn't mention suck-ass E-heroes or Gender-bending characters... apart from Jerry xD i joke Oldmaster but yeah i really liked it, and u should be proud, so wha if your only getting 2 people commenting on it, tha's more than me ;) i'll read the rest when i get around to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 OldMaster:Must keep it original, that makes it neater. ;) Shadow Avian:Thanks. =) Have you read all the chapters? o_O Nice. Azwolop:Thanks for reading =) Yeah, it's the first of its type.. no main villains, no evil organizations, no E-Heroes or random decks, a semi-realistic fanfic. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 mine hasn't got any villians at the moment! lol im trying too base it around the place i live, so there isn't gunna be any retarded, half-demon, half-ghost enemies but yeah i like where yours is coming from, definatly original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 What in a kind of place do you live? O_OOh, ISN't, sorry XD Else it would be a realy good thing to siggy :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHERO Andrew Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Hopefully I'm not too late, but can I have my character in the fan-fic? He can be one of those second-class characters. Name: Andrew Yuki (Son of Jaden Yuki)Age: 18Appearance: Looks a lot like Jaden, only a little more muscular. Wears a red shirt and blue pants.Personality: Serious, yet can be a funny guy at times. (Just like his dad)Biography Known as the son of the Second Duel King, Andrew doesn't get much respect as his Dad did. Now he joins the Agents to redeem his family name and possibly change the world. He also has Elemental Hero The Heat for a Duel Spirit.Weapons Nothing but his fists.Deck Environmental Hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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