Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ahaha! ^^ maybe that'll give the E-hero edge too your fanfic mare :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Andrew, your character includes E-Heroes. Erased! xD And why, does he has to be a relative to Jaden Yuki? My meanieness won't allow this anymore, your character is rejected. Maybe when people stop thinking about E-Heroes and Jaden, they can make better fanfics. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Well im not E-hero obbsessed nd its a great fanfic so how bout i be part of it?? xD Name: Az WilliamsAge: 16Appearance: long brown hair, covering one side of his face and curly at the back, always wears blue baggy jeans, black long sleeved shirt and long black coatPersonality: serious, mysterious, always looks depressed, and has a big temper, it just takes alot too get him angry. Although in duels he's laid back, and dopey, almost like a split personalityWeapons: Great with knives, one held behind his back via a holster, hidden by his coat, but when that fails, great with his fists and very agileDeck: Mokey Mokey dude!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ^Nice. Added to Season 2 (Season 1 ends in 15 or sth. so it won't take long) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Just don't let him steal Cindy! Or else :P Nah, he's too young for her ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 hey man, :P younger guys can be considered cute xD i could easly be a toy boy and replace yoo :P naw i joke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Younger girs ARE cuter. :) So make Cindy seventeen :) XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Episode 9: Famous + Bully = Arrogant Jerry, wearing manly PJs, looking out of the balcony of his apartment, Domino City - 12:30 PMJerry: (Cindy's out of her bed today, and everything has gone fine. Nothing much happened today, although Mr. Theasius said that two professional and rich agents will come. Cindy was scared today though, I don't know why. She said a scary relative will come. I must stand by her side.. so I better go) *leaves the balcony and goes to wear his clothes*--DCEO Hallways - 1:00 PMJerry: Hey Chris, I don't see a big rush although some skilled agents are coming.Chris: Nobody wants to see them, they'd be a bait for social humiliation then.Jerry: Social humiliation?Chris: Well yeah, one is famous and one is a bully, in my opinion I made a mathematical theory that is actually right about them and everybody else. I say: Famous + Bully = Arrogant.Jerry: Well, that's kinda funny, but mathematics?! --Domino City Underground Railroad - 1:05 PMCriminal: Wee, these stupid guys! Dueling on money, I took his money! Hehehe! Screw DCEO, I have the money!Maddy: Hey, criminal, I'd like you to hear my latest hit! A song called 'ME'!!Criminal: What the? Get out of my way?Johnny: No way, not before you try my "Johnny Pro" sunglasses! *puts them on the criminal's eyes* Criminal: Ahh, what the heck?!Johnny: Let's do the Hollywood kick, Madds!-HOLLYWOOD KICK-!Criminal (fallen on the ground): Take me to prison, before I start seeing pink elephants, although they won't be weirder than you two.. @_@Johnny: Yeah right dude, we're late for a date!Maddy: Come here *grabs the criminal's sweater* We'll need you to show off... Criminal: Where are you taking me?!Maddy: To DCEO..Criminal: Hey, wait! No! No!--DCEO Hallways - 1:25 PMJohnny: Ladies and gentlemen.. welcome the 2nd best team in DCEO, formed off Johnny Pro and Maddy Starr!Maddy and Johnny: Team Prowood!Jerry: Chris, you noticed? He said Starr.. that means Maddy is a relative to Cindy!Chris: Actually, Maddy's Cindy's sister.. and they are both daughters of Joseph and Amy Starr, who lived near Hollywood, and later moved to Domino City.Jerry: From where did you know all of this stuff?! *blinks*Chris: Simple! *grins* I looked into Cindy's files by hacking, because I wanted to know what are her hobbies!Jerry: *sweat drop* You're such a pervert. Anyways, I'll go check Cindy's room.. --DCEO, Agent Rooms - 1:30 PMJerry: *opens the door* Hey, Cindy... *looks around and finds Cindy putting her pillow over her head* Huh? What's wrong?Cindy: I don't want to see her..Jerry: Who? Your sister?Cindy: Yes! Jerry: But why? Cindy: She always makes fun of me because I'm her little sister.. she's picky and bully, and she's infamous for that!Jerry: But why is she like that?!Cindy: She's too arrogant, and her nature is a bully. When she and Johnny Pro teamed up, the arrogant team became disturbing to all of the DCEO. I just hope she never notices me.Jerry: Com'n, come with me, and if she or Johnny Pro pick on you, I will defend you and shut them up.Cindy: You aren't serious, right?!Jerry: I am! Come on, Cindy.. you don't have to worry about them! Cindy: Well, if you say so.. *gets up* Thanks for the help, Jerry.Jerry: It's okay.. *shy face* --DCEO Hallways - 1:40 PMJerry: Hey, Chris, I'm back!Maddy: Oooh, look who's came! It's my little pathetic sister Cindy!Johnny: Yeah, does she even dare to show up?!Jerry: Shut up, both of you! You know that my team is above your team, right?Maddy: Oh yeah, is that who I think it is? The infamous Jerry Oldmaster, and Cindy's new boyfriend?Jerry: IN-famous?!Cindy: Yeah, Jerry's my boyfriend and my love! Do you have a problem with it?Maddy: Nothing, but finally you could choose a better boyfriend than that emo junk!Jason: Hey, what is that supposed to mean?!Chris: Seems even Cindy's relatives hate you..Jason: Everybody hates me, Chris. And they ask why am I an emo.Cindy: Shut up, Maddy! Jason's still my friend! I can't believe how mean you are!Jerry: Well, about meanieness, if you want to learn more Mrs. Maddy, you can conduct Mare Octavius. He can cut you into pieces and teach you how it's really being mean. Or maybe he can give you a bullet shot in your head.Maddy: Hmph.. you brats.. Johnny: How about you duel these two brats?Maddy: Fine, Cindy and Jerry, WE challenge you to a duel!Johnny: We?!Maddy: Yeah, we! Cindy: And WE accept it!Jerry: (We?!) Um, sure thing.Johnny: Then let's do this! *standbys his duel disk*- DUEL~! - Johnny: Ladies first..Maddy: Yeah! Ladies, not brats! *draws opening hand* I'll show you my wrath! *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* Alright then, I will play with my Amazoness Swords Woman! (Amazoness Swords Woman|4|1500|1600|The opponent takes all Battle Damage to this card's controller that he/she would have taken from a battle involving this card.) Next, I will set a face-down card and end my turn!Cindy: Well, then, it's my turn! *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* I will summon my Cyber Harpie Lady! (Cyber Harpie Lady|4|1800|1300| This card's name is treated as "Harpie Lady".) Next, I will set a face-down card and end my turn!Maddy: Don't try and imitate my moves, lil sis!Cindy: Don't worry, I don't imitate stinky scum like you!Maddy: Hmph!Johnny: Well, ladies, stop fighting and look at my sexy move! *draws a card and looks at it (6 cards in hand)* Jason: So, Chris, what's your Mathematical Theory about Cindy tagging with Jerry?Chris: Easy! Bastard + Sweetie = Cute!Jason: Agreed. Gimme a failure high-five..Chris and Jason: Failure high-five!Johnny: Alright, now, I will start by activating my Reinforcement of the Army! (Reinforcement of the Army|Normal Spell| Add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck.) And I'll add Spell Striker to my hand! Next, I will Special Summon it by removing my Reinforcement of the Army in my graveyard from play! (Spell Striker|3|600|200|You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing from play 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly. Any Battle Damage this card's controller takes from a battle involving this card becomes 0.) And next, I will tribute it to summon my Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch! (Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch|6|2400|1000|When this card is Tribute Summoned, randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. If the discarded card was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the monster x 100.) And when this card is Tribute Summoned, I can choose a player and randomly discard 1 card from his hand to the Graveyard! And I choose.. Jerry! Jerry: Geez, bring it on! *discards a random card* Oh, damn, it's my Commandant...Johnny: You still haven't seen the other side of my Thestalos's effect! You get to pay Life Points equal to the level of the card you discarded multiplied by 100! Which, basically, means you lose 400 Life Points!LP Count: Jerry (7600), Cindy (8000) - Johnny (8000), Maddy (8000)Jerry: Hmph, you seem good at this! A good monster like this at your first turn!Johnny: Yeah! After that, I'll end my turn!Jerry: So it's my turn! *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Oh, how excellent! First, I'll activate my Terraforming! (Terraforming|Quick-Play Spell|Add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.) And by its effect, I'll add Necrovalley from my deck to my hand! Next, I will play with my Necrovalley! (Necrovalley|Field Spell|Negate the effects of Spell, Trap and Monster Cards that affect a card(s) in the Graveyard. Neither player can remove from play cards in the Graveyard. All "Gravekeeper's" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF.) Johnny: Wow! That field can be actually a good one for my father's new movie!Jerry: What?Johnny: Well, as you know, my father owns the Prowood Movie Company! The Prowood Movie Company has filmed Duelist Kingdom's duels one by one! Jerry: Geez, nice... anyways, I will continue playing my turn. I will summon my Gravekeeper's Assailant! (Gravekeeper's Assailant|4|1500|1500|You cannot activate this card's effect unless "Necrovalley" is on the field. When this card declares an attack, you can change the battle position of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field.) My Assailant will gain 500 Attack Points thanks to my Necrovalley, raising its ATK to 2000, and now, I'll declare an attack with it on your Thestalos!Johnny: What?! Are you crazy?!Jerry: In fact, I'm not. I'll change your Thestalos's battle position, then my Assailant will attack it, destroying it magnificently! Johnny: What?! No way.. my Thestalos!Cindy: Great move, Jerry! ^^ Jerry: Hehe, thanks. *shy face* Now, I'll set a face-down card and end my turn.Maddy: You brats! *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* I'll activate my Rush Recklessly, targetting my Amazoness Swords Woman! (Rush Recklessly|Quick-Play Spell|Target face-up monster gains 700 ATK until the end of this turn.) And now, that an effect targeted my Swords Woman, I can activate my face-down Trap Card! Dramatic Rescue! (Dramatic Rescue|Normal Trap|You can only activate this card when a card is activated that targets a monster on the field that includes "Amazoness" in its card name, or is named "Amazon Archer". Return the targeted monster to its owner's hand and Special Summon 1 other monster from your hand.) Now, I'll return my Swords Woman to my hand, and Special Summon another monster from my hand! And I choose this great monster.. Jinzo! (Jinzo|6|2400|1500|As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Trap Cards cannot be activated. The effects of all face-up Trap Cards are also negated.) Now you can't activate no Trap Cards! I'll also summon my Amazoness Fighter! (Amazoness Fighter|4|1500|1300|All Battle Damage to this card's controller that he/she takes from a battle involving this monster becomes 0.) And I will attack Gravekeeper's Assailant with my Jinzo! Jerry: Damn it!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (8000) - Johnny (8000), Maddy (8000)Maddy: Next, I'll set a face-down card and end my turn! Cindy: It's my turn now! *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* (Yes, it's Elegant Egotist!) I'm sorry Jerry, but can I replace your Field Spell? Jerry: Go on.Cindy: I'll activate my Harpies' Hunting Ground! (Harpies' Hunting Ground|Field Spell|When "Harpie Lady" or "Harpie Lady Sisters" is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. All face-up Winged Beast-Type monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF.) Next, I will summon my Harpie Queen! (Harpie Queen|4|1900|1200|You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Harpies' Hunting Ground" from your Deck to your hand. This card's name is treated as "Harpie Lady" while it is on the field or in the Graveyard.) And it will gain 200 ATK, making its Attack Points 2100! Also, by my Hunting Ground's effect, your face-down Spell or Trap Card is destroyed!Maddy: Pathetic! That monster's no match for my Jinzo!Cindy: Sure, but not after I play this combo! Elegant Egotist! (Elegant Egotist|Normal Spell|You can only activate this card when there are 1 or more "Harpie Lady" on the field. Special Summon 1 "Harpie Lady" or "Harpie Lady Sisters" from your hand or Deck.) And by this card's effect, I can summon a Harpie Lady Sisters from my Deck! (Harpie Lady Sisters|6|1950|2100|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Elegant Egotist".) By my Grounds' effect, I must destroy a spell or trap card, and I choose my face-down! Also, their Attack Points will be 2150! And now, to the last Spell Card of this combo, Triangle Ecstacy Spark! (Triangle Ecstasy Spark|Normal Spell|Until the End Phase of this turn, the ATK of all "Harpie Lady Sisters" becomes 2700, your opponent cannot activate any Trap Cards, and the effect of every Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field is negated.) Raising my Harpie Lady Sisters' Attack Points to 2700! Harpie Lady Sisters, attack her Jinzo!Maddy: No! My Jinzo!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (8000) - Johnny (8000), Maddy (7700)Cindy: Cyber Harpie Lady, attack her Amazoness Fighter!Maddy: I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I receive no damage from a battle involving Amazoness Fighter!Cindy: Then don't worry, there's more coming! Harpie Queen, attack her directly!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (8000) - Johnny (8000), Maddy (5600)Maddy: Ahh! So you've improved, brat!Cindy: Hehe! And don't call me brat, you bully! I end my turn.Johnny: Grr, it's all your fault I'm going to be alone, Maddy! *draws a card and looks at it (5 cards in hand)* Now, I will Special Summon my Cyber Dragon! Since if I don't have any monster and one of you do, I can summon it that way! (Cyber Dragon|5|2100|1600|If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand.) And now, I'll tribute it!Jerry: Oh god, not again!Johnny: But yeah, I'll play with my Mobius the Frost Monarch! (Mobius the Frost Monarch|6|2400|1000|When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field.) And by its effect, I will destroy your girlfriend's Hunting Grounds!Jerry: Whoa, that guy looks like Santa Claus..Johnny: Then seems Santa's giving your girlfriend her Christmas present! Mobius, attack her weak Cyber Harpie Lady!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (7400) - Johnny (8000), Maddy (5600)Cindy: Awwies, I never thought Santa would be that cruel!Jerry: Don't worry, my Gravekeepers will bring Santa to the desert.. um, whoa, that'd make him feel too warm.Johnny: Stop mocking my monster! I end my turn.Jerry: Now I will avenge my girlfriend! *draws a card and looks at it (3 cards in hand)* Hey-hey, my Commandant, I will discard you by my own will now, to add Necrovalley! Next, I will play it! (look above) And next, I'll activate my face-down Rite of Spirit to resurrect my Assailant! (Rite of Spirit|Normal Trap|Select 1 Monster Card that includes "Gravekeeper's" in its card name from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. This card's activation and effect are unaffected by "Necrovalley".) Johnny: You can't, idiot! Necrovalley doesn't allow you to interact with monsters in your Graveyard! Jerry: Actually, you're the idiot, because my Rite of Spirit's effect and activation aren't affected by Necrovalley. Johnny: Hmph..Jerry: Next, I will summon my Gravekeeper's Chief by tributing my Assailant! (Gravekeeper's Chief|5|1900|1200|You can only control 1 "Gravekeeper's Chief" at a time. Your Graveyard is unaffected by "Necrovalley". When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Gravekeeper's" monster from your Graveyard.) And by its effect, I can resurrect a monster from my Graveyard, and making my Graveyard unaffected by Necrovalley! I summon Gravekeeper's Assailant back! And now, I'll attack your Mobius with my Assailant! Changing its battle position, then destroying it!Johnny: Ughh... not again..Jerry: I always hated Monarchs, not because they're "strong", but because they're too weak for me! And now, Chief, attack him directly!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (7400) - Johnny (5600), Maddy (5600)Johnny: Ughh.. you little brat..Jerry: I end my turn!Maddy: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it (3 cards in hand)* Geez, these stupid Amazoness girls! I'll summon my Amazoness Blowpiper in Defense Mode! (Amazoness Blowpiper|3|800|1500| Select 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field during each of your Standby Phases. Decrease the ATK of the selected monsters by 500 points until the end of this turn.) After that, I'll end my turn!Cindy: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it (2 cards in hand)* Oh yeah, now you will be humiliated! First, I'll summon my Birdface! (Birdface|4|1600|1600|When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can add 1 "Harpie Lady" from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck.) And now to the Spell Card I just drawn! Aero Nail! (Aero Nail|Equip Spell|Equip only to a "Harpie Lady". A monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 300 points. When the equipped monster is removed from the field, you may equip this card to another "Harpie Lady" on the field.) It will increase my Harpie Queen's Attack by 300, making it 2200! Birdface, destroy her Blowpiper!Maddy: Ughh.. you'll pay for this!Cindy: Sure I will! Harpie Lady Sisters, Harpie Queen, attack directly! LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (7400) - Johnny (5600), Maddy (1450)Jerry: Great move, Cindy!Cindy: Thanks! I end my turn!Johnny: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it (4 cards in hand)* Disappointment, I say! I will summon my Card Trooper in Defense Mode, then end my turn!Jerry: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it (2 cards in hand)* Yeah! I will summon my Gravekeeper's Spear Soldier! (Gravekeeper's Spear Soldier|4|1500|1000|When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.) Johnny: Damn! No way!Jerry: Yes way! Spear Soldier, attack his Card Trooper!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (7400) - Johnny (4000), Maddy (1450)Johnny: Ah, damnit! Whatever card I draw by Card Trooper, it won't help anyways... I have no Kuribohs! *draws a card*Jerry: Assailant, Chief! End him!LP Count: Jerry (7200), Cindy (7400) - Johnny (0), Maddy (1450)Johnny: Noo!Maddy: Johnny! Don't leave me alone!Jerry: I end my turn!Maddy: *draws a card and looks at it (3 cards in hand)* This deck.. damn it! For my honor and dignity, if I even know what it means, I will play with my Amazoness Swords Woman! Suicide attack Jerry's Chief, and deal him the damage!LP Count: Jerry (6300), Cindy (7400) - Maddy (1450)Jerry: Nice, but not enough.Maddy: Grr. I end my turn!Cindy: Maddy, you're different than me, you don't deserve to be my sister. It's because, you don't have a bond with your deck like me and Jerry do. *draws a card and looks at it (2 cards in hand)* Ladies, attack directly!LP Count: Jerry (6300), Cindy (7400) - Maddy (0)Jerry: Great job, Cindy!Cindy: Hehe, thanks. ^^Jason: What's your theory, Chris? Chris: Easy! Arrogant x Cute = Cute wins!Jason: Got it right! Next Episode (10): Dark Breakthrough! Mr. Theasius vs. Dark Criminal! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 ELEMENTAL HERO'S SUCK!!!:x:x:x *ahem* Just had to get it out of my system now, on topic, I'll submit an character as well Name: Mason HendrixAge: 25Appearance:White shirt, black cloak and jeans and white glovesPersonality: He has fought in many wars, made plans for invasions etc. etc. He has an great skill in dueling as he watches and ''scans'' his opponents moves and deck.Weapons: Twin PistolsDeck: Warrior Toolbox Hope it's good enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 :) Coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Thankies, OldMaster. =P [spoiler=Click here if you dare to see a spoiler about next episode]Spoiler/Sneak Peek to Next Episode:A mysterious man breaks into the DCEO at night, however, he was detected by Mr. Theasius. A duel goes on between them, but who wins? And who is this mysterious man? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 O_O AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey Mare, how is my character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Elsandero, what was your character again? xD And THANKS!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 see the third page, after your 9th episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 ELEMENTAL HERO'S SUCK!!!:x:x:x *ahem* Just had to get it out of my system now' date=' on topic, I'll submit an character as well [b']Name:[/b] Mason HendrixAge: 25Appearance:White shirt, black cloak and jeans and white glovesPersonality: He has fought in many wars, made plans for invasions etc. etc. He has an great skill in dueling as he watches and ''scans'' his opponents moves and deck.Weapons: Twin PistolsDeck: Warrior Toolbox Hope it's good enough Accepted. First Appearance: Season 2 - Ep. ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 awesome, thanks Mare and keep up the good work of writing the GREATEST FAN-FIC IN YCM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 ^Really? Thanks a lot! Check out YGO R-City, it will be sorta connected with Duel Agents. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 will do when I have the time Mare oh and Mare, can my character be an Agent from Estonia? As you made OldMasters character be from Russia, I figured.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 ^I thought it'd be a bad guy. But I'll see. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 *shrugs* an bad guy, no thanks, I imagined what would happen if he would bump into Mare >_> So good guy for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted March 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Episode 10: Dark Breakthrough! Dark Criminal vs. Mr. Theasius [ It's 12:03 AM, Mr. Theasius has got out of his limousine, after it stopped right in front of his villa. A bodyguard opened him the door, and he got out, with a suitcase in his hand. He then made his way to the door, grabbed the keys from his pocket, and got in, then locked the door. He put the suitcase on a table, opened it, got his precious Gladiator Beasts and looked at them. Suddenly, he hears a window crashing. ] Mr. Theasius: Who's there?! [ He puts his Gladiator Beasts in his pocket, and runs to his wide, circled hall, to see a dark man standing in front of him, but still distant. The man is wearing a hat, a long black trenchcoat with opened edges (sort of like Kaiba), and a scarf, with only red round evil eyes visible ] Mr. Theasius: Who are you.. and why did you break in here?!Dark Criminal: Just call me 'Slade'. And now, give me your Gladiator Beasts, and Agent Octavius's location.Mr. Theasius: You are dreaming. I'd never give out that kind of information to a criminal so easily. Slade: Well then, I think I'll have to duel you to get that information.Mr. Theasius: I'm not forced to duel you, I can call the police or my bodyguards anytime to capture you.Slade: Maybe, but then my master would kill your wife.Mr. Theasius: My wife?! What have you done to her?!Slade: While you were "working" at DCEO, my master's other minions have kidnapped your wife. Mr. Theasius: [ sweats ] Cassandra... Slade: So, now that it seems you've changed your mind, shall we duel?Mr. Theasius: Yes.. if I win, you'll go away, give me my wife back and leave me alone!Slade: Fine by me. However, if I win, I'll have to take your Gladiator Beasts and Agent Octavius's location and information.Mr. Theasius: Alright. I'm afraid I have no choice. [ Mr. Theasius and Slade standby their duel disks, and start to duel ] Slade: As I'm the challenger, I'll start first. [ draws a card and looks at it ] Hmm, interesting. I'll summon Brron, Mad King of Dark World! (Brron, Mad King of Dark World|4|1800|400|When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can select 1 card in your hand and discard it to the Graveyard.) Then, I'll set a face-down card, and end my turn.Mr. Theasius: It's my turn now. [ draws a card and looks at it ] Alright, I will start with playing my Gladiator Beast Laquari! (Gladiator Beast Laquari|4|1800|400|When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladiator Beast" monster, the original ATK of this card becomes 2100. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Laquari".) Slade: My Brron still has an equal attack to your Laquari's. Mr. Theasius: True, but my Laquari's ATK won't be equal to your Brron's for long! I activate my Gladiator Beast's Battle Gladius! (Equip only to a "Gladiator Beast" monster. It gains 300 ATK. When the equipped monster is returned from your side of the field to the Deck and this card is sent to the Graveyard, return this card to your hand.) and I equip this gladius to my Gladiator Beast Laquari! [ Laquari receives a Gladius in its hand, and its ATK increases by 300, making it 2100 ] Now, Laquari, attack his Brron, Mad King of Dark World! Slade: Not so fast, Theasius! I activate my face-down card, Sakuretsu Armor! (Sakuretsu Armor|Normal Trap| Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster.) Now your monster is destroyed!Mr. Theasius: Laquari! No way! Slade: Yes way.Mr. Theasius: Hmph, I'll set a face-down card and end my turn.Slade: It is my turn, then. [ draws a card and looks at it ] Great, I activate The Cheerful Coffin! (The Cheerful Coffin|Normal Spell|You can discard up to 3 Monster Cards from your hand to the Graveyard.) And by its effect, I can discard up to 3 Monster Cards from my hand to the Graveyard! I choose my Sillva, Goldd and Beiige! My holy monsters, arise! (Sillva, Warlord of Dark World|5|2300|1400|If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, Special Summon it. If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, your opponent selects 2 cards in their hand, and places them on the bottom of their Deck in any order.), (Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World|5|2300|1400|If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, Special Summon it. If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, you can select up to 2 cards your opponent controls and destroy them.), (Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World|4|1600|1300|If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the field.) Mr. Theasius: Holy Mother Nature! 3 strong monsters in one turn!Slade: Their number will increase! I activate my last card in hand, Dark World Dealings! (Dark World Dealings|Normal Spell|Each player draws 1 card. Then each player discards 1 card.) It allows us both to draw a card, and then discard one. Mr. Theasius: [ draws a card and discards his Gladiator Beast Secutor ] Done.Slade: Yes you are [ draws a card and discards Broww, Huntsman of Dark World ] Now that I've discarded my Broww, Huntsman of Dark World, I can draw one more card from my Deck. [ draws a card and immediately summons it ] I summon my Scarr, Scout of Dark World! (Scarr, Scout of Dark World|2|500|500|When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Level 4 or lower monster that includes "Dark World" in its card name from your Deck to your hand.) Now, Scarr, Beiige, Goldd and Sillva... attack his life points directly! [ LP Count: 700 (Mr. Theasius) / 8000 (Slade) ] Mr. Theasius: C-Crap.. 7300 damage in one turn.Slade: Exactically. This is called a Two Turn Kill, as I'll kill you in the next turn, and finally avenge myself by killing Mare.Mr. Theasius: Avenge yourself.. why? What did he do?Slade: He stole the power of Dark Spirits from me.Mr. Theasius: What do you mean by "stole"..?Slade: I'll explain. We two were both left out by our family when we were children, to be adopted later by other families.. because of our dark curse. Only ones who have this curse are destined to gain the power of Dark Spirits for the current generation. When we were teens at school, and were called "darkies", we became friends, but when we both knew our destined power, Dark Spirit gods, Kuro'oh and Kurogami, decided to inherit only one the power... as two might clash and it will result in loss of both powers. We both competed, but because Mare done just three smarter moves, he was inherited the power and I was cursed... to stay in a mechanical body that even my original family didn't acknowledge me. I will avenge myself, and gain back my power from him.Mr. Theasius: I-I see... but I won't allow a criminal like you to gain this kind of power no matter what! Slade: You do not have a choice to allow me, you're merely a weak obstacle in my road to avenge myself, and gain my right of controlling the Dark Spirits!Mr. Theasius: Do not call me weak.. I have gained my place rightfully and after a lot of work.. I have defeated many duelists. In fact, I used to copy the legendary duelists' moves, I used to invent strategies and combos in dueling, and after I've grown up, I've shared in many tournaments and events, and won most of them! I'm not merely a duelist, in fact, I'm only on my way to be a legendary one!Slade: I'll end my turn.. to give you a chance to think back and know your truth.. merely a loser duelist who has fooled himself by his arrogance.Mr. Theasius: [ draws a card and looks at it, then smiles ] False! I've thought back and knew my truth... I'm an ace duelist! Slade: Hn..?Mr. Theasius: First off, I summon my Gladiator Beast Dimacari! (Gladiator Beast Dimacari|4|1600|1200|When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladiator Beast" monster, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Dimacari".) Next, I will activate my face-down Trap Card, Defensive Tactics! (Defensive Tactics|Normal Trap|Activate only if you control a "Gladiator Beast" monster. Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle this turn, and any Battle Damage you take is reduced to 0. Put this card on the bottom of your Deck.) This turn, my monsters cannot be destroyed by battle or make me receive damage! And I have to put this trap card in bottom of my deck [ Defensive Tactics hologram disappears, and Theasius places it in bottom of his deck ] And if you don't know, that's very good support for Gladiator Beasts! Dimacari, attack Beiige! [ Beiige gets destroyed, while Dimacari stays alive ] Slade: But why didn't you attack my Scarr?Mr. Theasius: Here comes the time for a pro to talk! Even though I'd have made you lose Life Points, you'd still gain advantage by Scarr's effect, and yet, if my Dimacari was gone, Beiige can do a final attack and defeat me while Scarr cannot, so I destroyed Beiige instead. They've always called me advantage duelist.. Slade: I see, and now by the effect of Dimacari, you're summoning... Mr. Theasius: Yes! My Gladiator Beast Alexander! (Gladiator Beast Alexander|6|2400|600|This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Gladiator Beast Dimacari". At the end of the Battle Phase, if this card attacked or was attacked, you can return it to the Deck to Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Alexander".) Now, your Sillva and Goldd will be destroyed by this great monster! A good advice is not to show off too much.. and not call people losers while they're not!Slade: Ugh.. we'll see, Theasius..Mr. Theasius: Who said I'm done? I'll activate my field spell card, Colosseum - Cage of the Gladiator Beasts! (Colosseum - Cage of the Gladiator Beasts|Field Spell|Place 1 Counter on this card each time a monster is Special Summoned from either player's Deck. All "Gladiator Beast" monsters gain 100 ATK and DEF for each of these counters on this card. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 "Colosseum - Cage of the Gladiator Beasts" to prevent this card from being destroyed.) [ The circled hall turns into a colosseum, with a sword in crystal, separating Slade's field from Theasius's ] Now, if you were shameful of loss by Gladiator Beasts, at least they will defeat you on their own land!Slade: Hmph, trust me, I won't lose. To Be ContinuedNext Episode (11): Summon The Even Stronger Gladiator, Gaiodiaz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 I just read all the chapters (including the new one) and this fan fic is awesome, no academy crap and theres killing.Great job Mare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 I like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks all. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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