dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 This is a test card for a new effect or idea or whatever. Please check the OCG, I'm have doubts on it and is it OP'ed? Also The image is thanks to ~kongruishu on DevianART. Alright here it is: Monster- This card gains 2000 ATK and this card's DEF is 0, for the remainder of the duel. When this card is destroyed, your opponent doesn't conduct their next Draw Phase.http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2219/312813t.jpg' alt='312813t.jpg'>Effect-This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Gemini monsters on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, place 2 Dual Counters on this card(Max.2). This card is treated as 2 monsters. If this card would be destroyed, it is not and you must remove 1 Dual Counter. If this card has 1 Dual Counter, then this card is treated as 1 monster. During the turn that this card loses 1 Duel Counter, you can destroy 1 card on the field and this card gains ATK equal to what type of card it was:Spell-This card gains 2300 ATK and loses 400 DEF. This card cannot be destroyed by a monster effect or Trap Card. When this card is destroyed by a Spell Card, you gain Life Points equal to this card's DEF.Trap-This card gains 2000 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by a monster effect or Spell Card. When this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, your opponent skips their next Draw Phase and you can draw cards equal to the number of Level 4 or lower Gemini monsters on your side of the field.Monster-This card gains 2200 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by a Trap or Spell Card. If this card is destroyed by a monster effect, you can Special Summon 1 Gemini monster in face-up Defense Position.Effect-This card is also treated as a DARK monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Gemini monsters on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, place 2 Dual Counters on this card(Max.2). This card is treated as 2 monsters. If this card would be destroyed, it is not and you must remove 1 Dual Counter. If this card has 1 Dual Counter, then this card is treated as 1 monster. During the turn that this card loses 1 Duel Counter, you can destroy 1 card on the field and this card gains ATK equal to what type of card it was:Spell- This card gains 2100 ATK. This card is not treated as a DARK monster. When this card is destroyed by a Spell card, you can pay 500 Life Points. If you do, you can Special Summon 1 "Gemini Seraphim's - Lucent & Lurid" in face-up Defense Position, ignoring Summoning Conditions.Trap- This card gains 2300 ATK and loses 200 DEF. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 face-up Spell, Trap, or monster on your opponent's side of the field.[/align][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Not sure about OCG, it seems fine though and I couldn't do better myself. I really like the pic, it fits the theme perfectly. Effect is original and really useful.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Ok thanks. I think I see a little error on my card, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I fixed it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 An original idea, not shure about the OCG, a lvl 10 card useally has a summon restriction so you may want o change the lvl. Not Op as far as I can see.A 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Thanks and i'll fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 very good, this card is very interesting, the effect is useful and the pic is very good9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 OCG:"When this card is Summoned, place 2 Dual Counters on this card(Max.2). This card is treated as 2 monsters. If this card would be is destroyed, it is not and you must remove 1 Dual Counter. If this card has 1 Dual Counter, then this card is treated as 1 monster. If this card is treated as 1 monster you can destroy 1 card on the field and this card gains ATK equal to what type of card it was:Spell-This card gains 1900 ATK and is also treated as a DARK monster. If this card is attacked by an EARTH or WIND monster that card is destroyed, without applying damage calculation.Trap-This card gains 1800 ATK and during your next Standby Phase, you draw 1 card. If the drawn card is a "Gemini" monster, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.Monster- This card gains 2000 ATK and this card's DEF is 0, for the remainder of the duel. When this card is destroyed, your opponent doesn't conduct their next Draw Phase." The bold is the proper OCGThe slash means wrong or unnecessary. The picture is great and so is the effect I think its balanced due to its original ATK and its Level although you may want to put some summoning requirements on it to balance it out even more because its additional effects add to its strengths. Overall it's quite impressive. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 it could use a little more atk despite the atk gain effects since it's lv9, 400 atk is a bit too weak for it. LLD already pointed out the OCG errors, so this gets 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Alright I'll up the ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 it doesn't have to be much, certainly less than the 1000 mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I put the ATK on 900 and The OCG is fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 ok, that's good enough of an atk, with the OCG fixed I'll raise the rate to 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 wow you work fast 24,353 posts...... any ways thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Still some OCG errors but im only pointing out 1 and thats the quotes around Gemini. Get rid of them thats improper >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 OK.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Ew ; .; i sounded a tad rude. Sorry ^^' Anyways now its a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 eh..eh...y..ea..yea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Well, everything else has been said and fixed.An epic idea (*kicks self for not coming up with it*) 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 BUMp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kraiouchkine Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 effect's way too long... not going to bother to read it... I'm not going to rate it because that will be very indecent of me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 effect's way too long... not going to bother to read it... I'm not going to rate it because that will be very indecent of me. Why post if you're not going to read the effect? After all, this is a new type of card; so of course the effect is going to be long and complex. This is because official OCG does not exist so you have to work existing OCG around what you want, leading to a drawn-out effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 BUMP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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