Wanderley Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 [align=center]This is a Set for X-L's fan ficall of the images I'll use is from Wanderley [Me] Bright DestinyEach time a Normal Monster is destroyed by battle select 1 of the following effects: - discard 1 card to draw 1 card - increase your Life Points by 500 - return 1 Normal Monster from your Graveyard to your hand Gladiator Synchron hope you like[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 You can't just use black for your bullets. Copy the darkest color from the text and use that insteadEach bullet counts as a new sentence, so capitalize the first letter.Finally, the bullets are too big. It is an interesting card. I can see it has potential Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kraiouchkine Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I know there is some error with the wording... but I can't put a finger on it. Like I'm pretty sure the last effect should be "Add 1 Normal Monster from the Graveyard to your hand." and the 1st should be "Discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card." but I'm not really sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I know there is some error with the wording... but I can't put a finger on it. Like I'm pretty sure the last effect should be "Add 1 Normal Monster from the Graveyard to your hand." and the 1st should be "Discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card." but I'm not really sure. No you are wrong my OCG is correct^^i work on card^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I know there is some error with the wording... but I can't put a finger on it. Like I'm pretty sure the last effect should be "Add 1 Normal Monster from the Graveyard to your hand." and the 1st should be "Discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card." but I'm not really sure. No you are wrong my OCG is correct^^i work on card^^ Yes, you're OCG was good, but your grammar and gfx are poor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 The card is awesome, as well as the pic, you deserve a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 good card. the pic is awesome!, i like the effect too. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 thank you dudes :Dupadte the card^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Good card, I like the image and the OCG is solid (just add "and activate" after "select".) The effects aren't the most creative, but nice Normal Monster support. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 than k you dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 finally something VERY useful for the vanillas, well done wanderly, well done indeed 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 thank you dude :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 added gladiator synchron ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 are we going to be seeing some supports for that soon? Because it'll suck without it 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 dude if you take a look you will seen that it is a tuner^^and if you read the text^^you will see that there is mentionend a other monster ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Dude you suck I was gonna do this >.> Why does everyone beat me to these things!?Anyway, OCG for the first card is good, the 2nd one made me go awwww and then lol. I guess I'll give this set a 9.5/10 so far ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 thank you dude^^i will post this image tomorrow in my archieve ;)the synchro will have an effect thought^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Only one OCG error, you put "Monsterfrom" instead of "monster from". I love the second card's pic, it is SO COOL! The first card is really well balanced and really useful.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 ohh^^ :Dfixed :)thank you^^the image is tomorrow aviable in my archive ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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