SwineRider Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 [align=center] [spoiler=[u]Lore[/u]] The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the Level of this card x 400. If this card is destroyed by an opponents monster, destroy your opponents monster after Damage Calculation. Remade! \/ [spoiler=[u]Lore[/u]] You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard when it is drawn to activate 1 of the following effects:•Special Summon 2 "Biomechanoid Tokens" (Machine-Type/Dark/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 500) in Defense Position.•Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Quite a few OCG errors. The type is fake. Pic is pretty bad. Effect is balanced though.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Not bad, I'm not really a fan of the image, and the OCG is fine. It does seem balanced though, kind of like a DD Warrior Lady, or DD Assailant. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubblin Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 It's quite a nice cardOCG is goodPic is mehish in my opinionBalancedquite good 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 fake type, effect is balanced out, though still somewhat bland 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I think I've heard of this archtype except by someone else T.T hmmm..... idk though so no points off for that Image...Quite honestly could be loads better but oh well (-1)Effect...is ok but its not totally original. its just two totally unoriginal and slightly overused effects. (-1)Fake card type (-2) *Remember this is the realistic card section and this wouldnt be considered an archtype...archtypes are cards that have NAMES that are related not actual card types such as Spirit or Rock. Unless they changed that and I havent yet found out or if im just wrong in general.*OCG has some errors too :[ (-1) 5/10 (I'm a tough rater =/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I'm fine with this card's rating =/ I don't like the outcome of this card either. I'll try to change it.Thanks for comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Actually I'm raising it to 6/10 T.T cause the effect shouldnt really have points taken off since its not completely unoriginal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 the first part of the effect "The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the Level of this card x 400 " why not just make it 2000 attack and defense i doubt that any card will change its level :) but 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 There are cards that change levels =/ actually there are LOADS I have like 7 so its effect is still impressive since those effects wouldnt just boost the level but its ATK as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Alright, I made a remake of this card. So feel free to make another comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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