Intimus Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Hi, this is my first card, please rate and comment so I can improve. I have updated the card.By the way I found the picture on Google images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 [spoiler=Correct OCG:]When this card is sent to the Graveyard, add 1 card to your hand. 1 Question. Where do you get to add the card from? Deck, Removed from Play or Graveyard? Anyway, the pic is actually pretty good. I'll give you a 8.5/10 for your first ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Firstly, you need to say where the card will be before you add it to your hand eg. add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. Please do not make fake types. Effect is too bland, it needs another one. The pic is pretty good though.4/10 because of the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Thanx I will fix soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 If you are going to post in the realistic section, then you shouldn't make up a monster type. When you say "add a card to your hand", do you mean from the deck, graveyard, or field? I am sure the other members will crucify you for not using OCG. All that means is your effect text doesn't match up with the predefined standards. (everyone screws up OCG so don't worry about it). My only other comment is that your card should say "when this card is sent from the field to the graveyard" or "when this card is sent from your had to the graveyard", not just "if this card is sent to the graveyard". welcome to Yugioh Card Maker Forumsyour first card gets 2/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I have fixed it. Please rate more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Not bad, the image is alright and the OCG is decent, only small errors. (deck = Deck / graveyard = Graveyard / may = can) Maybe just add a Level limit to the card that is added to your hand, just to balance it out. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 without a lv restriction on the card added to your hand, it's too powerful 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Thanx for telling me about the level limit. Shall I do Lv 4, 5, or 6? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 yes i agree level restriction :) if not it is a bit overpowerd :) good for a first card 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 I'd say up untill LV 4 . 9/10 since your a beginner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Updated!! now level limit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 ok with the level limit I can raise the rate to 8.8/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Thanx. Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intimus Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Good for your first card. Pic looks rather "un-Yugioh-ish", but the effect is okay. Good one. 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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