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My first card (Pls rate) (Have updated)


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[spoiler=Correct OCG:]

When this card is sent to the Graveyard, add 1 card to your hand.

 

1 Question. Where do you get to add the card from? Deck, Removed from Play or Graveyard? Anyway, the pic is actually pretty good. I'll give you a 8.5/10 for your first ;)

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Firstly, you need to say where the card will be before you add it to your hand eg. add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. Please do not make fake types. Effect is too bland, it needs another one. The pic is pretty good though.

4/10 because of the pic.

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If you are going to post in the realistic section, then you shouldn't make up a monster type. When you say "add a card to your hand", do you mean from the deck, graveyard, or field? I am sure the other members will crucify you for not using OCG. All that means is your effect text doesn't match up with the predefined standards. (everyone screws up OCG so don't worry about it). My only other comment is that your card should say "when this card is sent from the field to the graveyard" or "when this card is sent from your had to the graveyard", not just "if this card is sent to the graveyard".

 

welcome to Yugioh Card Maker Forums

your first card gets 2/5

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