Mandalores Fury Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 More on the way. If anyone has any good pictures i could use, please send them to me with ideas. I'm knew to this so all opinions count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 its a good idea but some OCG (not alot for a newbie) I dont really like the pics but ill give them a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Yeah, nice effect for the monster, but the ritual card is incorrect. I see what you're trying to do with it, but you just don't do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Death Knight should have another effect, but you're new so this gets 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mandalores Fury Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 What effect should he have? I thought about having a counter effect for the opponent that allows them to remove cards from the graveyard from play. Also, what are these OCG errors Archwing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mandalores Fury Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Ok, since im new to this, what does OCG mean and OPed? Also, here is the 4th card, im adding it to the top just in case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 all but the 2nd effect are way too powerful, give some drawbacks to them 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 OCG needs work. Some of the effects are too OP (like ragnarok pointed out). Pics aren't brilliant either. Since you are new 7.65/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 good pictures again ( any monsters lol ) 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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