Weather Report - Stand Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 I'm reviewing this tomorrow in a Weather Report of chapter 1, but just a few inferences about you: 1. By posting your entire story in such a short amount of time has made it so that people just glance at the whole thing thinking 'It's okay', instead of letting excitement build up over time!! 2. In fact, your entire topic has been filled up in one day, mostly. That's not a very good sign, you may just have a creepy stalker fan!! Kinda kidding, but it doesn't look good if you post a reply to everything, it looks like just a schoolboy anime discussion. 3. Your signature denounces Naruto, and yet you're using it in your story!! That one was just a joke, though. Voting for Bleach?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain_Angelo3 Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 well the point i think is he is trying to show how weak naruto is and that it takes 3 captains to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 I haven't even read the story yet, my review "technique" is about your first impressions on reading it for the first time ever. Thanks for spoiling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Well yeah I kind of hate Naruto, but I know others like it and it seems okay so far... so basically I'm fine with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Nice. I cant wait to see how this turns out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 At least someone likes it =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain_Angelo3 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 i like it i voted if you stop than i will kill you on your poll lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 this looks really good :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Thank you, just to let everyone know Chapter 7 will be released after the Weather Report... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain_Angelo3 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 hahaha nice play of names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 If I wasn't preoccupied at the moment, I'd give you a Weather Report ( I'm practicing... ) But so far, 1-4 has been kinda short. Maybe a little more description is possible? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Yeah but I really focusing on the main story so i might go back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 i hope you make more, I encourage you all to READ THIS. PLeaze as a fan (=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Sweeeeet. I love how throughout the chapter, while byakuya is in pain. Jiriya does absolutely nothing. Awesome chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Yeah but Jiraiya is knocked out remember Kisame water sharked him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 yeah, i know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain_Angelo3 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 goog chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 I changed my mind on the review, I don't feel like i, but it looks like a bad story from the chapters I read. You need alot more description to let us know what's really happening, because at the beginning, the survivors could be cats flying around in a hailstorm for all I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Okay I'll think on how to change that...Edited with a little background info Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 People tell me I'm going to fast so that is why I slowed down... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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