ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Hi, these are my first cards. I have viewed this page for some time before, so I think I know what is an overpowered or underpowered card. Also, I have been on different YGO forums but I think this one is the best :) [spoiler= Effect] This card gains effects based on the number of "Fire Tokens" you control. At least 1, once per turn, you can discard 1 Spell Card from your Hand to draw 2 cards from your Deck. At least 2, you can tribute 2 "Fire Tokens" to add 1 "Fire Counter" on a card on the field. A monster with a "Fire Counter" cannot be destroyed by battle. At least 3, you can tribute 3 "Fire Token"s to destroy all cards on the field, then you can Special Summon another "Token Fighter, Hitae" from your Deck. Pictures are from http://www.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Nice work but the if needs to be a When.A 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Nice work but the if needs to be a When.A 9.3/10 Ok,changed, thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Nice First cards. 10/10. I really like it. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Maybe you could make some way to have each search out one or the other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Some minor OCG errors, but still brilliant OCG for a new member. Effects are really well balanced. Pics rae really good as well.10/10 you are going to go far, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Well done for your first cards. ocg is very good, just small minor errors. pictures are nice, they match well. effects are balanced and creative.9.8/10Good Luck in your future card making Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Thanks a lot :) I'm glad you like them, I'll work on OCGMaybe you could make some way to have each search out one or the other. Maybe but wouldn't it make the card slightly overpowered. Thanks for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 I agree with the others, so it's 9.2/10. You should be making more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 for Token Fighter, make sure you say it can only activate one of the effects per turn, otherwise it can get OPed 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Holy crap...I have nothing to say except if you continue like this you may as well be the next Icyblue. These are the best newbie cards I've ever seen.10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Thanks a lot :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Amaaaaaaaaaaaaazing for first cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Quite good for your first cards. I like these. If you do make a set out of these that would be great. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 likw the first one th ebest great effects and for both 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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