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Better Family Guy Cards


DiWolfe

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I wasnt saying mine are better than theboss101 Im referencing this post

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-130611.html


Lol' date=' cards like these are suppose to be funny, rather than serious and correct.

BTW, LOVE how you made gay peter a fairy. Just TOO good.

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Well my friends who asked me to make some wanted them to actually maybe be printed and have some actual effects that go with the regular rules instead of funny ones. Some cards may have a slight funny part thrown in there.


There are quite some spelling mistakes in your cards' date=' and might I suggest to try and find better pictures on some of your cards, because some of them look really ugly stretched.

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Really? I read over each card and had other people read over the cards and we didnt find any major spelling errors at all maybe only 1 atleast.

 

I do agree with some on the pictures need to be editted but as I posted, they arent fully done yet.

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Spelling error examples: "tributeing"= Tributing "this cards level"= this card's level, "sacrificing" = Tributing. They are extremely small errors, yet they matter at YCM. Also, check your OCG, it needs some improvement.

 

Btw, love the "Mrs. Lockhearts(fix that also to 's) Breasts" card :)

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Spelling error examples: "tributeing"= Tributing "this cards level"= this card's level' date=' "sacrificing" = Tributing. They are extremely small errors, yet they matter at YCM. Also, check your OCG, it needs some improvement.

 

Btw, love the "Mrs. Lockhearts(fix that also to 's) Breasts" card :)

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Gimme some examples of the OCG you're mentioning. I know ATK points is one that needs to just be ATK

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Well, on "Gay Peter" I don't see how "That monster is taken from your opponent for two turns" is good OCG.

I would suggest changing that part to:

"When a monster destroys this card, that monster is removed from play for two turns after Damage Calculation"

 

"Peter Rogen"

Suggesting: When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, double it's ATK and DEF.

 

"Peter - Laura Bush"

"FLIP: Destroy a monster who's level is equal to or lower than this card's level."

 

"Peter's Crotch Shot"

"Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field."

 

These are my SUGGESTIONS, not perfect OCG fixes, I am not the one to be able to give "perfect" fixes. Bear in mind I am in no way an expert on OCG, but I say what I think would be better.

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