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Black Rose Dragon/ Assault Mode


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Changed the whole card...again...

 

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EFFECT: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". When this card is Summoned, you can destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the Battle Position of all of your opponent's Defense Position monsters until the End Phase. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard."

 

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Enjoy!:D

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Interesting card, but the image could use a background.

 

Maybe change it so you can only apply the effect to 1 monster your opponent controls instead of all of them.

 

Although the effect may be hard to activate, since this card would be in a plant based deck, you might not find many Dragon-Types in your Graveyard that you could remove from play. I would change it to Plant-Type, rather than dragon.

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Hey there.

 

OCG is nearly perfect, but "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the Battle Position of all of your opponent's Defense Position monsters until the End Phase" should be "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster to change all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls to Attack Position".

 

I'm going to have to agree with Icy's claim to it being a tad underpowered. You see, this only takes on the battle position switcher and makes it a mass effect, but drops the nuke and attack reduction. I'd add "When this card is Summoned, destroy all cards on the field except this card". Now it's a better BRD, as Assault Modes were intended. ;) If you're feeling adventurous, you could even play with an extra ATK reduction ability too.

 

Another thing to add, all other Assault Modes are 2 Levels above their originals with 500 more ATK and DEF. I'd adjust the stats accordingly, making this Level 9 with 2900 ATK and 2300 DEF".

 

Don't use "1st Edition" in your Circulation as the Card Maker block capitalizes it, making it "1ST EDITION", which is unrealistic. I'd use "LIMITED EDITION" or simply leave it blank.

 

Set IDs these days always have 4 character prefixes, and 5 character suffixes, beginning with "EN". They've went with this and haven't gone back, 3 character prefixes and suffixes without EN are a thing of the past, so if this is to be released, which is good to visualize for realism, I'd make it so. Try something like "DRAG-EN041" or something along those lines.

 

Adjust accordingly and it's good. ;D

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