Eury Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 This. Is. SPAAAAAARRRRTTTTTAAAAAA!!!!!!! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. This card cannot be destroyed by battle while in face-up Attack Position (Damage Calculation is applied normally). When this card inflicts Battle Damage, your opponent must discard 1 monster. If they cannot this card can attack once again in a row. You can only use this effect once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Not bad, I like the image, and the OCG is fine. I'd say it is reasonably balanced, maybe just add that it can't be destroyed by battle while in a certain position. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leoluiz Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 good, i like the pic. 8/10 THIS IS TOON SPARTAAAAAAAAA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Fix: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, your opponent must discard 1 Monster Card from their hand. If they cannot this card can attack once again in a row . You can only use this effect once per turn.otherwise its fine.picture is funny.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 'monster' and 'card' are never capitalized. Your right about 'once again in a row' though. Thanks for rates. Edit: And discard infers from the hand. You can't really discard from anywhere else. -.- 2nd Edit: Fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 'monster' and 'card' are never capitalized. Your right about 'once again in a row' though. Thanks for rates. Edit: And discard infers from the hand. You can't really discard from anywhere else. -.- really...? i remember someone telling me they had to be.. now im confused.. my bad.just for completion sake for the hand bit.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 effect is right for a toon and good picture 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 The terms "monster" and "card" are usually capitilised but only when saying "Monster Card" just like "Spell Card" and "Trap Card". Other than that, the effect is balanced and a good card overall. The pic goes with the name and idea, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 The terms "monster" and "card" are usually capitilised but only when saying "Monster Card" just like "Spell Card" and "Trap Card". Other than that' date=' the effect is balanced and a good card overall. The pic goes with the name and idea, 9/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 OCG is fine. Effect is very well balanced and very cool. Pic is EPIC.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Perfect. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 such a shame you couldn't get the pic animated to say "THIS IS SPARTA!" on it, that would have been great the OCG is solid and the effect remains balanced though 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I AM BIB Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Good8/10 but its a gladiator... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Gladiator's were in Sparta. Thanks for comments and rates @rest. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Это очень хорошо! The picture is cute too. Did you make the background for it? If so 10/10 if not 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 plz put an img credit up for wanderly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 10/10, a very nice and balanced card SPARTAAAA! although, i belive that image is from Wanderley's image archive, if so please credit him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 The credit is where '1st Edition' should be. Thanks for rates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.