Guest ash_202457 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Dragon of Death must DIE!Just kidding, but the picture need a background and its a little OP'd, 6,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 ok...does it have an effect?is it only summoned by polymerisation?can it be special summoned?:?6/10 for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 It should stick to 1 Type (Zombie IMO)Do not add a description. Usually, Fusions do not have descriptions, but effectsWhen quoting Monster names, use ":"Red-Eyes B. Dragon" + "Lord of D." Overall, 5.5/10. It's okay, but needs a couple of fixes to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Horrible card is horrible.Sorry, but it's true.Pic is bad, and overused.Effect is Flavor Text, Fusions don't have Flavor Text, only Normals.Make an effect.Use quotations for Monster names.No Dual Type.Only 1 Type and a Sub-Type, unless the card is treated as another Type via Effect.No need for brackets for Fusion Material Monsters. I don't see the true meaning of Death from this card. I am related to the true meaning of Death that is not this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Hmmm, fix your grammar; basic effect...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 that a bit better!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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