Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 [spoiler=Thunder Clan] [spoiler=River Clan] [spoiler=Wind Clan] [spoiler=Shadow Clan] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JGGNoah7 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Well, the token has too much ATK and DEF. Also, like many would say, this card is Over Powered. Oh, and "Face-Down" is correctly written as "face-down". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Well' date=' the token has too much ATK and DEF. Also, like many would say, this card is Over Powered. Oh, and "Face-Down" is correctly written as "face-down".[/quote'] 1. its OP'ed2. FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JGGNoah7 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Well' date=' the token has too much ATK and DEF. Also, like many would say, this card is Over Powered. Oh, and "Face-Down" is correctly written as "face-down".[/quote'] 1. its OP'ed2. FIXED Ok... That's what I ment, but in ACTUAL words. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nosferatu Reaper Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 there are some OCG errors, but nothing to worry aboutand it's op'ed, cute pic9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JGGNoah7 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 OMG! The Lore must be further eddited. XD I suggest something like: "Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Flamepaw Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 500) on your side of the field. This token cannot declare an attack nor used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each "Flamepaw Token" on the field. Once per turn, Tribute 1 "Flamepaw Token" to destroy 1 face-down card on the field." There, though I suggest reducing your monsters ATK and DEF like, say, to 1500 or less, or put summoning conditions because it's still OP'ed this way. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Okay i Fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JGGNoah7 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Okay i Fixed it LOL!! You basically Copy-Pated. XD XD It looks MUCH better now. Just wait for further comments posted by other. =) It was nice to help. LOL ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 New card added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 i like them...:lol: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Cute, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Everything is brilliant. Pics are fantastic.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 *Faints* THANKS!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 very good, the effects are pretty nice, the pics are cute9/10 :D I like it ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks!!new card added!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Chrono Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Wind Clan Deputy- Bluemoon is OP'd. if it were to attack a Eed-Eyes B Dragon, your opponent would lose 3500 LP, and his picture seems to be done on paint... Rest of them look fine, 7.5/10, Keep it up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Wind Clan Deputy- Bluemoon is OP'd. if it were to attack a Eed-Eyes B Dragon' date=' your opponent would lose 3500 LP, and his picture seems to be done on paint... Rest of them look fine, [b']7.5/10[/b], Keep it up... It was fixed on paint EDIT:Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilManDaBest Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 These creatures were most definetly in a book I read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Yes these cards are based on the Warrior book siers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 BBuBumBump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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