RyanAtlus Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 seriously Larrycotter' date=' just how many readers you have now?[/quote'] I was serious.Now that you're back, I've got 2 readers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 ok then, you can start the recruiting for more soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 But...sending PMs to people is a bit n00bish isn't it?So far, I've started 2 spamthreads in the TCG section with a link to this story, but no one seemed to even care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 actually the former option isn't a bad idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 l never was uninterested in your story - that is, l never formed an opinion on it, because l never read it.This is because l don't feel like tracking down every chapter you wrote. lf you placed the links to each chapter in your first post, no one would have to track them down, and you may get more readers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 l never was uninterested in your story - that is' date=' l never formed an opinion on it, because l never read it.This is because l don't feel like tracking down every chapter you wrote. lf you placed the links to each chapter in your first post, no one would have to track them down, and you may get more readers.[/quote'] I tried to make it so so that the maximum size for the first post of a thread in the fanfiction section would become unlimited, but neither Umbra nor YCMaker seemed to care about it.If you want, I'll refer to each part by adding the post number to the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Yes, yes, that's what l meant.Nevertheless, if you do this l will begin reading your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 see Larrycotter? It's not so bad, you got another one already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I put the post numbers in the "chapter overview" section.I still don't think that really matters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 a lot of people can get lazy in reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Just read the first 12 chapters. Your very descriptive in certain parts, such as the beginning with the allusion of Ludwig being the vulture over his prey. The duels were fun to read and the story itself was entertaining. Personally I love Ann's Simochi Deck... Heal/Burn for the win! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 now Larrycotter, let's hope your writers block doesn't kick in again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 now Larrycotter' date=' let's hope your writers block doesn't kick in again soon[/quote'] Well, I've already finished chapter 13, but I feel it's still not what it's supposed to be. Th length is OK, but I have the feeling that all the descriptions in the chapter are rather short and cliche-ish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 shortness and cliche are for us to judge, so you just put them up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 What I meant was; I'm not satisfied yet.The problem with the first book was; when something was ready, I posted it, regardless of whether it was crap or not. That's a mistake I don't want to make when working on this book.I honestly thought you prefered quality over quantity... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 I can offer my assisstance as a Beta reader if you'd like. I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi (Although I do make mistakes while typing fast obviously...). Still the offer's there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 What I meant was; I'm not satisfied yet.The problem with the first book was; when something was ready' date=' I posted it, regardless of whether it was crap or not. That's a mistake I don't want to make when working on this book.I honestly thought you prefered quality over quantity...[/quote'] I do, which is why I wouldn't care for the length. I've read fics on ff.net where the chapter is barely more than a paragraph and it developed well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 I can offer my assisstance as a Beta reader if you'd like. I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi (Although I do make mistakes while typing fast obviously...). Still the offer's there. I've already got one.I thought that had been made clear in post 1? ^^Thanks for the offer. I'll contact you should Mystery ever be away for a long period. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 you shouldn't worry yourself over grammar too much here though Larrycotter I've read more than enough fics on ff.net where the grammar is not proper, but few every complain because they get the gist of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 I try to care about Grammar because one guy at school is a Grammar Nazi; my English teacher.I'll try to fix the chapter tonight, then Mystery will have tweeked my awfull Spelling and Grammar by tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 please, that's English teachers. You REALLY think the average reader in books care if the author screws up a little occasionally? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 I personally do. Those who do something should at least pretend to care.Also, Ch. 13 won't be up untill next week due to schoolwork. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 meh, I won't have too much time to read next week until Thurs anyway, so take your time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted February 28, 2010 Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Thanks for the review.Sorry that I haven't continued reading yours, but I've been drowning in the vast amount of school work I've been given. Senior year sucks. Have I mentioned the fact that Chapter 13 is up yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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