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Looks good ^_^ the blood spot is drawing my attention away from the focal' date=' though.

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Yup. Because a dark, dim patch near the corner of the tag always draws away from a much brighter, sharper focal ^^

 

That "dim patch" is red.

It's the only red on the entire canvas.

It sure as hell attracted my eyes at first sight.

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Really? People from other gfx sites didn't seem to find that an issue so idk.

 

Well people from other gfx sites are actually GOOD at gfx.

Go figure?

 

Hey I'm not saying I don't value your opinions' date=' because if I didn't I wouldn't have fixed the watchmen logo =/ I'm just saying that all the other people I've shown have liked the red area rather than thought of it as a problem. If I didn't value your opinions, I wouldn't bother posting here =p

 

And you are GOOD at gfx hars. You and I both know that.

 

 

Color IS sexy, but, now that I think about it, the blood spot isn't as HQ as teh rest.

 

That issue has been pointed out and fixed ^^

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The gass effect and the blood from the logo both come off as opposing flows. By adding what looks to me like a flow into the logo, you've further worsened your dual focal. the gas effect might work with the render, but I still think you should either continue to tone down the logo, add another flow from the right that also leads to the render, or remove the logo completely.

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