?- Bright Illuminator, Oricul -?

[JG.]

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If this card battles with a DARK monster, decrease the ATK of the opponents monster by 500 during the Damage Step. You can Tribute this card and 1 other monster you control to destroy all DARK monsters on the field, and increase the ATK of all LIGHT monsters you control by 800 until the End Phase.

 

Image Credit

 

My first card... Actually, no, but it's the first one I post on the forums, I've been using the Cardmaker since April or something. Please rate, and fix if anything needs fixing. Also, the main part of my cards I'm interested in is balance, so please comment on that no matter what. After a while, I'll give a rep to the person who gave the best comment, in terms of constructive critisism and such. If there are no good comments, then I save that rep xD

 

Also, as you may or may not be able to see, I've been following the forum for a while, so I think I know most of the do's and dont's of here. If there's anything I missed, please do tell me.[/align]

[Bengal]

Glad that you decided to post a card, I quite like this one.

 

FW's image is great, and the OCG is solid.

 

In terms of balance, it looks fine, there is nothing really I would change. It is a bit situational, but it would fit nicely in a LIGHT deck despite the fact that the effect isn't the typical type for LIGHT monsters.

[JG.]

I was going for Lightsworns, but now that I look at it, it doesn't really fit, does it? Thanks though.

[Sweet Lightning]

Beautiful image, solid effect, and great OCG.

 

Great job, I look forward to your next post. :) 8/10

[JG.]

You know what, I always hate when people think new members suck just because they're new. When I get more known here, I will change that. That is my goal. I'm not blaming you though, just telling you. And thanks.

[Vailan]

Nice card! :)

 

8/10

[JG.]

...More? Anyways, thanks.

[Zauls]

Like the pic. OCG looks solid.

8.5/10

[JG.]

Thanks.

[JG.]

I am officially deeming this thread "dead". Bengal gets the rep. People who later beat Bengal will obviously get one too, and I may also remove Bengals.

[Sweet Lightning]

You know what' date=' I always hate when people think new members suck just because they're new. When I get more known here, I will change that. That is my goal. I'm not blaming you though, just telling you. And thanks.

[/quote']

 

I edited my post.

 

I have nothing against new members, in fact, I think they're awesome and hate when YCM elitists attack them just because they're new and don't get the system. Rankings don't mean anything, it's just your post count.

 

New members can make superb cards just like all the other members of YCM. And I always enjoy when they do.

[JG.]

You know what' date=' I always hate when people think new members suck just because they're new. When I get more known here, I will change that. That is my goal. I'm not blaming you though, just telling you. And thanks.

[/quote']

 

I edited my post.

 

I have nothing against new members, in fact, I think they're awesome and hate when YCM elitists attack them just because they're new and don't get the system. Rankings don't mean anything, it's just your post count.

 

New members can make superb cards just like all the other members of YCM. And I always enjoy when they do.

 

I think I'm starting to like you ;-) And thanks for editing.

[Sweet Lightning]

No problem. :)

[Rehva]

Seen The Pic Before.

 

OCG Errors

 

Nice Effect

 

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

OCG is relatively good, and the effect is balanced, so this gets 8.2/10

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Glad that you decided to post a card' date=' I quite like this one.

 

FW's image is great, and the OCG is solid.

 

In terms of balance, it looks fine, there is nothing really I would change. It is a bit situational, but it would fit nicely in a LIGHT deck despite the fact that the effect isn't the typical type for LIGHT monsters.

[/quote']

 

I agree with this post

9/10

[JG.]

Thanks guys.