JG. Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 [align=center]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, destroy the monster that destroyed it. You can Tribute 2 WIND monsters you control to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Image Credit This is mainly my bro's work, he thought of the effect and such, I simply tweaked it and such. Rate and fix.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Mysterious Edition? Coooool.Love the pic and Name But it's OverpoweredI dont check OCG -_- 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Not bad. But shouldn't it be a WIND monster? (O_O) 9/10. Jood Gob XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Hmm, even if it requires 2 non-Tuners? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Woops didn't notice that, but give it a small negative effect and it should be about even. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 pic is good .need to change effect and level or ATK or DEF.effect say 2 wind monster why?!! this monster is light, and it have some errors.and it have 3000 ATK and DEF with that its only level 8.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Well, the WIND monsters are because it's a Storm Dragon, so yeah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 very nice picture, the effect is really cool8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Not bad at all, off to a great start. =) OCG looks to be:1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, destroy the monster that destroyed it. You can Tribute 2 WIND monsters you control to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Needing to control 2 WIND monsters to Tribute 2 WIND monsters you control is sorta redundant, which is why you don't need it. ;) See Exploder Dragon for evidence of the "destroy the monster that destroyed it" part should you be willing to find it. Set IDs can't have spaces in them, but they do have 4 character prefixes these days. Always. ;) So I'd use "IAMM" for "I am mysterious" or something like that. Circulation is sorta Unrealistic, so I'd use "LIMITED EDITION" or leave it blank. It should be fairly balanced as its revival effect isn't much better than say, Dark Simorgh's, and it has a steep Synchro requirement. Overall, a job well done. Adjust accordingly and it'll be even better. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 OCG was pointed out. The pic is great. The effect is good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Not bad at all' date=' off to a great start. =) OCG looks to be:1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. [b']When[/b] this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, destroy the monster that destroyed it. You can Tribute 2 WIND monsters you control to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Needing to control 2 WIND monsters to Tribute 2 WIND monsters you control is sorta redundant, which is why you don't need it. ;) See Exploder Dragon for evidence of the "destroy the monster that destroyed it" part should you be willing to find it. Set IDs can't have spaces in them, but they do have 4 character prefixes these days. Always. ;) So I'd use "IAMM" for "I am mysterious" or something like that. Circulation is sorta Unrealistic, so I'd use "LIMITED EDITION" or leave it blank. It should be fairly balanced as its revival effect isn't much better than say, Dark Simorgh's, and it has a steep Synchro requirement. Overall, a job well done. Adjust accordingly and it'll be even better. ^_^ You're getting a rep for all that. Also, IDC about Set ID and all that, it's just for dicoration TBH. I'll fix the OCG now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 strange to see it's LIGHT and not WIND anyways the OCG errors are pointed out, might need a slight drawback though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 pretty good 8/10 but i love the mysterious edition Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Good card, I like the image and the OCG is now fine. Kind of an overpowered effect, but I think the Summoning conditions somewhat balance it out, being as you would need 2 lower Level non-Tuners. The only change I might make is to change the first effect to: "Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls." 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetilord99 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 good job i lik the name very crative bit why is the picture weird tho you r vry gd at car making props to u 9/10 bcuase in my world nine meens 12im sry 9 meens 10 im my world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Necro-much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetilord99 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 i beg ur pardun/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 You necrobumped. It's illegal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 it's pretty balanced imobut is it meant to say Strom or Storm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 It's meant to say Ström, which is the norwegian word for energy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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