legolover09 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 This is my first set I am happy with. I would appriciate consructive critisisim and not just good or bad. Anyways with out futher ado:[spoiler=Monster in Preview] Chromosone B (DNA)'s Lore: Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "DNA" monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Defence Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster cannot be destroyed by battle. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) [spoiler=Spells in Preview] Lore: When this card is activated special summon one Carbon Dixoide token (Microscopic-Type/WIND/2 Stars/ATK 100/DEF 700) and one Water token (Microscopic-Type/WATER/2 Stars/ATK 700/DEF 100). When these tokens are removed from the field special summon one Oxygen token (Microscopic-Type/WIND/1 Star/ATK 0/DEF 0) and one Glucose token (Microscopic-Type/WATER/3 Stars/ATK 1200/DEF 500). Then destroy this card. [spoiler=Traps in Preview] [spoiler=Synchros in Preview] [spoiler=New Cards] I use these cards in roleplays so they may be a little op'ed. Just give me your opinion for if they weren't used in roleplays and if they were. All coments apprieciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Chromosone B should be a Union MonsterIts "Defense Position" ..and use "decrease a monsters ATK" instead of "lower any monsters attack"(BTW it's always ATK and DEF not Defense or Attack points ;) )...The idea is pretty cool...OCG needs work, but thats no problem..Try to find pics, that look more like YGO cards....(Good Mutation has text on it and Electron Microscope is a real photo..for example) by now 6.5/10But with some changes i will higher the rating =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 They don't have too bad of effects but some of them seem to have vague effects. Also, your Good Mutation card doesn't really make too much sense (How can your opponent's monster attack it's owner? You'll need to specify that the monster that you controlled from your opponent or something like that); It seems like it could use some revising. Also, I have that weird feeling that this set should be in the pop culture section I don't know why but it feels like it should be in that section. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Thanks for the comments. really appreciated. I thought I made it a union monster but appearently didn't. I shall make some fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 They don't have too bad of effects but some of them seem to have vague effects. Also' date=' your Good Mutation card doesn't really make too much sense (How can your opponent's monster attack it's owner? You'll need to specify that the monster that you controlled from your opponent or something like that); It seems like it could use some revising. Also, I have that weird feeling that this set should be in the pop culture section I don't know why but it feels like it should be in that section. 8/10[/quote'] there could be some supportor its just a ocg errori think ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 yeah it was an ocg error. I fixed it. The oponent picks one of the fallowing. and one of its effects was wrong too. BTW one characteristics is that most of the Microscopic non-synchro monsters have 500 ATK and 200 DEF, but some are different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajs Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Kinda wiered but i like the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 good detalied effects :) and i would of thought the pictures are ok ( i dont know what the proper things look like :) and i agree with ajs i would never of thought of this idea :) 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 a few unrealistic pics, the new archtype I guess is ok, not great though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 updated a few effects with better ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 I added 2 new ones. Cell Wall and Protoplasm. Please rate my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 interesting. these microscopic pests get a 9/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted September 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 I shall bump it up I want more people to lock at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I could get a mod to lock it. oh, wait, i think you mean non-mod people to look at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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