Lexadin Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Well as said, this is the story of Garbol and his quest for retribution.Tell the OCG errors (If there) Pic credit: Morgoth[spoiler=Lore] This card can only be equipped to "Garbol, the Praying One". During each End Phase, place 1 Twist Counter on this card (max 3). Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 100 for each Twist Counter on this card. When there are 3 Twist Counters on this card you can Tribute this card and 1 "Garbol the praying One" to Special Summon 1 "Garbol, the Forgiven" or 1 "Garbol, the Rampaging" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field. Pic credit: el grimlock Here comes the twist in the story: IT HAS 3 ENDINGS NOW![spoiler=Bad Ending][spoiler=Lore] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "A Twist of Fate". During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card. [spoiler=Story] After praying and praying for thousends of years, his anger grew and after a while his anger turned into Hate. And finnaly Gargol embrased the Darkness and his hate became Blind Rage. Now he killes and destroyes everything on his path, leaving behind him only a path of destrucion and mayhem. Pic credit: ProjectHybrid [spoiler=[b]Neutral Ending[/b]][spoiler=Lore] After many ages of praying, garbol gave up. He started enhancing himself with mechanical components. His body changed so much, that no one would recognize him. Now he has become a Android and guards his new home "The Clockgear Tower"! [spoiler=Good Ending][spoiler=Lore] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "A Twist of Fate". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT monsters (Except "Garbol, the Forgiven") by 400. Once per turn, decreasing this card's ATK and DEF by 400, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower LIGHT monster from your Graveyard. [spoiler=Story] after ages of praying, his prayes have been heard. And now he is back in the heaven, full of Joy and now 1 of the angels who fulfills prayers' wishes. Also her true form has returned. Pic credit: ftourini Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 interesting. i always like a story.there are some spelling errors in a fair few words but thats ok. and some ocg errors in the effects (only minor ones though)Garbol, The Rampaging pic is being alot lately....but its a good one so im not to fussed.overall: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Tnx for the comment.Really I haven't seen it before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 haha, thats fair i guess... reason i said its overused cause ive seen it a few times and even ive used it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 I've only seen the Garbol pic a few times, so it's not overused for me. Still, I wished you'd given it an effect instead of just the spell support alone 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I like it this way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 You should do a neutrel story aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 How do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Like, Garbol goes through the same shiz Gigabyte went through, becoming a cyborg sort of thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Like another vanilla, but with 3000 attack. Story would be somthin like: after praying for centuries, Garbol gave up, trying to become a normal fighter. Now, he is an Atheist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Yeah! I like that idea! I shall try making a Neutral stroy as well. Edit. How can I find a pic that looks like Garbol but isn't him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Ill find one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Wait! I might have 1 that could fit, but I need some oppinions. Is this ok for Garbol's neutral story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 hmm... i dont mind that pic... still looks like he's praying though and i was here thinking he became an Atheist.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 It should be an Atheist, but searching for a praying mantis monster/ceature that ISN'T praying is hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 thats true. if you cant find one. use the above pic then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I need some more reactions though. But tnx for your oppinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 So, got the Neutral Image yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Maybe, but need some more oppinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Made an poll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 i vote on Prop: Garbol Neutral Story. i suggest others do the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Tnx for the vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Why are LV 4 people considered senior mebers? I don't get it... And the image is just fine, don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 umm, i spose they are? after 400 posts you think they would be.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 It's not that hard to get 400 posts...I joined 36 days ago and already am a Level 4. You too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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