gigy7123 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 yaaaaaa...!!!remember im new there will be ocg errors i dont even know what that is plz tell me how to fix it ill try and add more cards later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Alright. Here goes: Majoras Mask:Image could use a backgroundEffect fix:"While this face-up card is on the field, All DARK monsters you control lose 100 ATK. Increase this card's ATK by 100 points for every monster targeted by this card's effect." Goron Link:Image could use a backgroundIMO, I would give it a Rock-TypeGive it an effect too? Link:Same as "Goron Link" (except the Type) Fierce Deity Link:It should be a Fusion monster, since you are Tributing 2 monsters listed on it. And what's more, not 1 of them is a Tuner. If I were to change it, it would be: "Fierce Deity's Mask" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersCould have a better imageGive it an effect? Moon Countdown:Image would be better without the bars and items in the wayShould be a Continuous Spell Card, because it needs to stay on the field for those 5 turns:"During the 5th Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy all of your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards." Fierce Deity's Mask:Image could use a backgroundMake it also a Tuner Subtype for the effect for FDL to be Summoned.And an effect would help make it more useful and original To be honest, the OCG (Official Card Grammar) error (since there is only 1 effect card) is not that bad. Another good thing is that all of the stats in the cards are fair. The only downfalls are that the images could be less dull, and includign effects or adding Support Cards would make these Normal Monsters less useless (For the record, a Set should not include this many Normal Monsters). Overall, 5.5/10. Just keep it up, listen to what me and other people say about your cards, and see if you can improve or possibly perfect them. I've seen worse. If you need any help or advice on your cards, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Ur right. There are OCG errors. (Official Card Grammar) Like for Moon Countdown the correct grammar is probably "During the 5th Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field." since ur new, 7/10 Some pics could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Actually, I made my own Majora's Mask cards, and none of the pics of the mask have good backgrounds. I was planing on posting them shortly, so you can check them out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Bad OCG and grammar.6+1=7. 6+1+3=10. Can't you add?4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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