.Nu-13 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 This is my The Creator God of Light, Horakhty card:http://img297.imageshack.us/i/createcardphpx.jpg/ [spoiler=Effect]"Obelisk the Tormentor" + "Slifer the Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon of Ra" This card can't be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters.When this card is Fusion Summoned,destroy all card on the field except this card.As long as this card remains face-up in the field,neither player can Summon,Activate or Set Spell and Trap or attack Cards.Once per turn,you can pay 3000 life points to Special Summon 1 Fusion Material Monster used to Fusion Summon this card.Monsters Summoned by this effect don't must activate its effects of destruction.When all 3 Fusion Material Monsters used to Fusion Summon this card was Special Summoned by effect of this card,you win the Duel. What i can fix in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 First off, don't remake Egyptian Gods or their support. After you fix that, make sure the card shows up when you put it on the thread. Third, put it in realistic cards. Otherwise it seems OK i guess for a noob. I'm suprised with your OCG, I can only see one or two errors, most noobs aren't very good at that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 The OCG is, for the most part, fine, most ppl don''t like gods, though. 7/10, cause ur a noob, and therefore can't yet be expected to know what ppl like and hate on this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 OCG is bad. Don't make gods and their support. Also, some of the effects are unnecessary.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 thanks for critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 eh, the last two effects was wer u lost me. other than that, not bad i gues, mayb spruce up OCG a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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