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1. There is no ???? Type.

2. There is no "infinite" attack (Obelisk's effect doesn't count). There are ways to make the ATK of a card effectively infinite (similar to The Wicked Avatar).

3. Its effect whereby it returns to your hand is slightly cheap in any card and extremely cheap in a card with infinite attack strength.

 

So, it's a nice concept, but not well executed.

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The major issue is the "infinite" ATK, since you can just use something like Book of Taiyou or Fairy Meteor Crush and you win the duel. Plus, infinite ATK isn't realistic and it shouldn't be in this section. If you want to get rid of that possibility, just say that "this card cannot attack".

 

My suggestion is to come up with an effect that makes it end up having high ATK, but less than infinite.

 

Such as:

 

"This card can only be Summoned if there are 30 or more cards in your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, it gains ATK equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x100. This card cannot attack. If it is sent from the field to the Graveyard, return it to your hand."

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Here's a card to go along with it. I think it's a little more reasonable for some of you :)

 

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This second card is more overpowered than the first, especially being a a level 1 monster. this should be a 2-tributer monster. Either that or lower its ATK point gains to 100 instead of 500.

 

EDIT - I didn't notice the no damage to your opponent's life points before. That makes things interesting. 8/10 again.

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