26walls Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 i am sorry if you can not see the picture of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 First of all, do not post links to you cards. Click on your finished card, then copy the link below it into your thread. Now: DIVINE= Banned. Seriously, Why did you give it a DIVINE attribute? WIND is much betterYou misspelled "Kirby"Image is a quarter showing (wtf?). Wait for the image file to finish loadingSuper Smash Bros Brawl is not a real Type (and if it was, I doubt it would have a Type that long). "Fairy" is a better TypeIf it's a Toon Subtype too, it should have the traditional Toon effect of only being Summoned when "Toon World" is on the field. Look at a Toon card, and take inspiration from that.Do not include a Description for an effect monsterOverpowered, and the "80" does not makes sense. IMO, ATK/1400 DEF/1800 3/10. I'm being generous considering you being new here. You still have a chance to change this card to make it look perfect. Just listen to what me and other people comment on, and understand what we're saying about the cards. If you need any help or advice, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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