Kocrow17 Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 This is my first time posting a single card. I usually build a set but this card is just so good, basing a set around its effect would just take away from what makes it so special. I'd appreciate any comments/reviews/rates you may have. Alternate Art (As Requested): NOTE: I AM AWARE IT SAYS "NORMAL SUMMON" INSTEAD OF "SPECIAL SUMMON". THIS IS INTENTIONAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 make the pic not so light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 yeah the pic is a little dogey, biut i love the effect 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 very nice, but I think it is supposed to be SPECIAL SUMMONED during your opponents turn. I don't know how to normal summon a card during an opponents turn. Very awsome though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thanks for the posts, everyone! I've added a darker image card. very nice' date=' but I think it is supposed to be SPECIAL SUMMONED during your opponents turn. I don't know how to normal summon a card during an opponents turn. Very awsome though. 8/10[/quote']Yes, it's SUPPOSED to be Special Summon, but I decided on Normal Summon instead, like Ultimate Offering. I am God Kaze, I do not make such mistakes. Thanks for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Good pics, balanced effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thanks for the posts' date=' everyone! I've added a darker image card. very nice, but I think it is supposed to be SPECIAL SUMMONED during your opponents turn. I don't know how to normal summon a card during an opponents turn. Very awsome though. 8/10Yes, it's SUPPOSED to be Special Summon, but I decided on Normal Summon instead, like Ultimate Offering. I am God Kaze, I do not make such mistakes. Thanks for commenting.Oh come on, there has got to some time you wherent perfect. nobody can be perfect all of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thanks for the posts' date=' everyone! I've added a darker image card. very nice, but I think it is supposed to be SPECIAL SUMMONED during your opponents turn. I don't know how to normal summon a card during an opponents turn. Very awsome though. 8/10Yes, it's SUPPOSED to be Special Summon, but I decided on Normal Summon instead, like Ultimate Offering. I am God Kaze, I do not make such mistakes. Thanks for commenting.Oh come on, there has got to some time you wherent perfect. nobody can be perfect all of the time.Now that you mention it, one of the firsts sets I posted when coming here said "remove from the game" instead of "remove from play". But that was when I just started, so it doesn't count, lol. All of my newer cards are GOLD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 k, at least you are not self Righteous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 i expected you would make another great card =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 God Kaze, you're too awesome too post only a single card. =D This card is awesome, but just like other people have said, the picture could be... slightly better. The effect is excellent and I favor the way you always choose to make unique effects. Once again, awesome cards. I hope you make alot more! One last thing, on the first line of your effect, I'm wondering if you should change it to:When an opponent's monster attacks your Life Points directly, and no monsters exist on your side of the field, you can return......... Yeah, the dot.dot.dot. just means the rest of the effect, which is perfect. I'm sorry for questioning your card making holiness. I shall repay you... with a positive rep for making an awesome card. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 k' date=' at least you are not self Righteous[/quote']Obviously you don't know me. XD i expected you would make another great card =DThanks. If you want REALLY great, stay tuned to by ZTK set (almost finished! Just need some card-art). God Kaze, you're too awesome too post only a single card. =D This card is awesome, but just like other people have said, the picture could be... slightly better. The effect is excellent and I favor the way you always choose to make unique effects. Once again, awesome cards. I hope you make alot more! One last thing, on the first line of your effect, I'm wondering if you should change it to:When an opponent's monster attacks your Life Points directly, and no monsters exist on your side of the field, you can return......... Yeah, the dot.dot.dot. just means the rest of the effect, which is perfect. I'm sorry for questioning your card making holiness. I shall repay you... with a positive rep for making an awesome card. =) Thanks for the rep. Well my original card did say, "On your side of the field", but I changed it before posting to "you control" because it is the more updated version of the text and it really helps shorten it. Same goes for the "attacks you" and "attacks your Life Points". They both mean the same, and are proper card grammar, but one is shorter than the other, which is good when dealing with long effects like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 like the second pic so much more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 The second art is great. My opinion of the card is great. I like it & it could come in handy but, truthfully I don't believe it's one of your greatest cards but, good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 prefer the 1st image actually, but yeah great effect and great card 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 The card great and has good defensive technique.Great and I'm aware what you tried to say here.(I like the way how you balance it.)That's one of your greater cards(but not the best,I think.)I think it really deserves.............9.75/10!It really can come in handy.I won't tell you "your're awesome!!" because your deeds already prove that.So far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thanks for the posts, everyone. I'm getting some mixed messages here in terms of card art, lol. Anyway, I'm glad you guys like it. Oh, and thanks for the high rates^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugioh_123 Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 8.35467546965786/10 !!!LOL!!! :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Its good, i had to read the first part a couple times to get it, at first i thought it said when a monster attacks you directly and you contol no monsters, send 1 spel or trap to your hand.... and the last part. Lol, i was like, um its not on the field you cant use that, but then i read it again 9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Wow, you are still seeing things, I thought that would have stopped after you saw a dog in my samus cards. You realy have problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Wow' date=' you are still seeing things, I thought that would have stopped after you saw a dog in my samus cards. You realy have problems.[/quote'] lol shut up ok just shut up lol, yes i have some problems, my homework is getting to me man, i tell you, there out to get me! there out to get me!!!! by "there" i mean me, and byt me, i mean my teachers lol :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 lol. okay freak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 lol. okay freak. (this will be the last time i post in this thread) but, i am not a freak, im just special haha, yeah no, but seriously school is getting on my back, with college deadlines rollin in, ahhhh!!!.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I fail to see the importance of this card, and what role it will play in a deck. I guess I just have to think harder but I hardly ever get on here so I won't spend all my time doing that. 10/10 for being GK7/10 for playability. Maybe I need more proof, but thats just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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