TheVaron Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Attempting to get the rest on. These are my first cards so yeah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 They're okay for first cards. I don't know much about Persona, so...yeah. Maybe you should have grouped these people with their respective personas, or whatever they're called. The card text, what we call OCG for some strange reason, is off. Maybe something like THIS would do: 'This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is Tributed for the Tribute Summon of "Name Here", you can treat this 1 monster as 2 Tributes. If "Name Here" is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Good for first cards. OCG needs fixing though and try to use border-less pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Please get backgrounds for all Pictures, cards without borders, and why are they Psychic? OCG Tips Here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118387.html OCG Stands for Original Card Grammar. Pictures: 3\10Effects (They are Sorta Overpowered.): 4\10Creativity: 8\10 6\10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 an interesting concept for first cards. so far a little more work and you'll be right on track, although its good for your first. if u need any help PM me or check my persona 3 set (link in my sig) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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