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The spark effects are too strong. They take too much focus away from the head, which does not comply with the Rule of Thirds which is lacking in this tag.

 

It is not balanced, either. The empty space is really empty.

 

The sparks are more interesting than Iron Man himself. You should focus more on him than external effects.

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I actually disagree with you, Mia.

For one thing, the rule of thirds isn't really a rule, it's more of a guideline. Things can look good without complying with the rule, and this tag does.

And also, working on just the focal is what keeps a piece in the state of GFX, it's working on a piece in its entirety, understanding that there are things beyond the focal that makes it art.

 

@koramore: It looks good, but what you need now is a better background, some sort of city background. Choose the right one, and get the effects right, and it will be absolutely amazing.

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I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT, moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority.

 

I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture.

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I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT' date=' moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority.

 

I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture.

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This. My eyes keep drifting to the bottom left, but there's nothing there to look at. :/

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I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT' date=' moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority.

 

I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture.

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This. My eyes keep drifting to the bottom left, but there's nothing there to look at. :/

 

I lol'd at your bad sense of direction.

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