koramore Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Cnc/ClassCnc/Class Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 The spark effects are too strong. They take too much focus away from the head, which does not comply with the Rule of Thirds which is lacking in this tag. It is not balanced, either. The empty space is really empty. The sparks are more interesting than Iron Man himself. You should focus more on him than external effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I actually disagree with you, Mia. For one thing, the rule of thirds isn't really a rule, it's more of a guideline. Things can look good without complying with the rule, and this tag does.And also, working on just the focal is what keeps a piece in the state of GFX, it's working on a piece in its entirety, understanding that there are things beyond the focal that makes it art. @koramore: It looks good, but what you need now is a better background, some sort of city background. Choose the right one, and get the effects right, and it will be absolutely amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT, moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority. I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT' date=' moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority. I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture.[/quote'] This. My eyes keep drifting to the bottom left, but there's nothing there to look at. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 If you filled out the bottom-right, this would be pretty nice. I like the BG TBH. As of now this is Solid Novice, but has potential to be Solid Mod with the right adjustments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I actually wasn't really talking too much about the RoT' date=' moreso, just about how the effects were a bit strong, and how they took attention away from it. Iron Man needs a bit more to him to keep it consistent, or else the sparks will take priority. I never said it was bad, but it is a bit unbalanced compared to the rest of the picture.[/quote'] This. My eyes keep drifting to the bottom left, but there's nothing there to look at. :/ I lol'd at your bad sense of direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I think I just jizzed in my pants. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 So bland so boring!bad flowand i really dont like the BG dun no why...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Thanks for all the CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 So bland so boring!bad flowand i really dont like the BG dun no why...? I lol'ed so f***ing hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Lol, JG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 So bland so boring!bad flowand i really dont like the BG dun no why...? I lol'ed so f***ing hard. Me thinks its boring :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 So bland so boring!bad flowand i really dont like the BG dun no why...? I lol'ed so f***ing hard. Me thinks its boring :/ Me thinks you need to lrn2cnc. No offense, but that was just so wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 ya its coolur legendary so u dont offend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 ya its coolur legendary so u dont offend Then you're obviously too stupid to know that rankings mean nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 ya its coolur legendary so u dont offend Then you're obviously too stupid to know that rankings mean nothing. Em Vrery Sdudid Mess :3 i didnt mean his stars i ment hes right and nows how to cnc :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Thanks for clearing that up Mia, I would have done it myself, but w/e. Stars mean about as much as person eating a cake in Europe means to a person in China... Did that make sense? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 It makes lots o sencesry im so newbish lol btw i like ur new name ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuntryBoy Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 WOW you must luv iron man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Yes, Ironman is badazz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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