basariosvolcanis Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 [attachment=14022]This is my very first card on cardmaker, and also the one from which i take my name. Presenting Basarios! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parkourmania Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 verry good for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Increase it's LV to 7, then it will be ok. Or lower its ATK Points.Some Grammar Issue's.And i might know where you got the Pic from :lol:overall 6.8/10My overall if it was fixed would be 9/10It it depends on how much you worked on it.other then that, Good job for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Nice card for a new member... but when you write that effect remember this During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 pretty decent...quite a few grammar...6/10....fix da grammar lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Hmmm.... I strongly agree with thechampion #1.... but for effort.....8.215 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 just a few minor errors you need to fix but still great :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 you should increase the level, and getr a better pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 it is ok i agree with what the others said no need to repeat 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I agree with the others. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I like the card, it's great for your first card. There are some grammar issues. 7/10 Fix The Grammar-9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 5/10 grammar and the pic isnt really that grate to cg-esk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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