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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you take 1500 or more Battle Damage from 1 attack. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Rush Counter on this card. Each time a Rush Counter is placed on this card, your opponent discards 1 card. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card. If this card would be destroyed by an effect that does not target, you can remove 2 Rush Counters instead.

 

It's a Rush Card.xD

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'Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card.' =

 

'This card gains 300 ATK for each Rush Counter on it, during the Damage Step only.'

 

And that picture's overused. Also, could it be a Dragon/Machine dual type?

 

Otherwise, pretty good.

 

8/10

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Let's RUSH!

 

OCG: Seems to be okay, nothing to say against.

Effect: The Effect and Name does fit well together. Only problem, why the discard card effect sentence? It's seems out of place. If it would say "Your opponent can discard 1 card to remove 1 Rush Counter after you place 1 Rush Counter on this card." (By the way, I'm not sure if this OCG is right.) That would be okay, but if not, it's out of place for me.

Image and Name: I see a dragon like monster with wings. It works.

 

Overall: 7.8/10

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'Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card.' =

 

'This card gains 300 ATK for each Rush Counter on it' date=' during the Damage Step only.'

 

And that picture's overused. Also, could it be a Dragon/Machine dual type?

 

Otherwise, pretty good.

 

8/10

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I changed the Pic.

I worded the effect really that way, I didn't want it to have an ATK boost.

Thanks for viewing.

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Let's RUSH!

 

OCG: Seems to be okay' date=' nothing to say against.

Effect: The Effect and Name does fit well together. Only problem, why the discard card effect sentence? It's seems out of place. If it would say "Your opponent can discard 1 card to remove 1 Rush Counter after you place 1 Rush Counter on this card." (By the way, I'm not sure if this OCG is right.) That would be okay, but if not, it's out of place for me.

Image and Name: I see a dragon like monster with wings. It works.

 

Overall: 7.8/10[/color']

 

The discard thing? It's rushing your opponent to lose cards. That was the Idea.xD

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'Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card.' =

 

'This card gains 300 ATK for each Rush Counter on it' date=' during the Damage Step only.'

 

And that picture's overused. Also, could it be a Dragon/Machine dual type?

 

Otherwise, pretty good.

 

8/10

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I changed the Pic.

I worded the effect really that way, I didn't want it to have an ATK boost.

Thanks for viewing.

 

Er...but increasing Battle Damage dealt can only be achieved by either raising your ATK or lowering your opponent's DEF. If that's what you wanted:

 

'If this card battles a monster, the targeted monster loses 300 DEF for each Rush Counter on this card, during the Damage Step only.'

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'Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card.' =

 

'This card gains 300 ATK for each Rush Counter on it' date=' during the Damage Step only.'

 

And that picture's overused. Also, could it be a Dragon/Machine dual type?

 

Otherwise, pretty good.

 

8/10

[/quote']

 

I changed the Pic.

I worded the effect really that way, I didn't want it to have an ATK boost.

Thanks for viewing.

 

Er...but increasing Battle Damage dealt can only be achieved by either raising your ATK or lowering your opponent's DEF. If that's what you wanted:

 

'If this card battles a monster, the targeted monster loses 300 DEF for each Rush Counter on this card, during the Damage Step only.'

 

Some cards really increase Battle Damage and even change them.

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'Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card.' =

 

'This card gains 300 ATK for each Rush Counter on it' date=' during the Damage Step only.'

 

And that picture's overused. Also, could it be a Dragon/Machine dual type?

 

Otherwise, pretty good.

 

8/10

[/quote']

 

I changed the Pic.

I worded the effect really that way, I didn't want it to have an ATK boost.

Thanks for viewing.

 

Er...but increasing Battle Damage dealt can only be achieved by either raising your ATK or lowering your opponent's DEF. If that's what you wanted:

 

'If this card battles a monster, the targeted monster loses 300 DEF for each Rush Counter on this card, during the Damage Step only.'

 

Some cards really increase Battle Damage and even change them.

 

I'm not sure what you're saying and how it's different to what I am. Could you give me an example of a card that has an effect like yours?

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I know a card somewhat like it' date=' except it changes the damage completely.

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rod_of_the_Mind%27s_Eye

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"Rod of the Mind's Eye", like you say, completely changes the damage dealt. However, your card only changes damage dealt through battle; therefore, the Rush Counters will either increase your ATK or lower your opponent's DEF. (Most likely during the Damage Step)

 

That's what I'm saying.

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I know a card somewhat like it' date=' except it changes the damage completely.

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rod_of_the_Mind%27s_Eye

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"Rod of the Mind's Eye", like you say, completely changes the damage dealt. However, your card only changes damage dealt through battle; therefore, the Rush Counters will either increase your ATK or lower your opponent's DEF. (Most likely during the Damage Step)

 

That's what I'm saying.

 

Rod of the Mind's Eye changes BATTLE Damage not Effect Damage.

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I know a card somewhat like it' date=' except it changes the damage completely.

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rod_of_the_Mind%27s_Eye

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"Rod of the Mind's Eye", like you say, completely changes the damage dealt. However, your card only changes damage dealt through battle; therefore, the Rush Counters will either increase your ATK or lower your opponent's DEF. (Most likely during the Damage Step)

 

That's what I'm saying.

 

Rod of the Mind's Eye changes BATTLE Damage not Effect Damage.

 

Which is the same as your card. I too am only talking about Battle Damage.

 

"Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is increased by 300 for each Rush Counter on this card."

 

And Battle Damage is most often manipulated through ATK boosting or DEF reducing effects.

 

The point is, your effect mentions Battle Damage increases, which in OCG is written in the form I originally posted.

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