Gigansword Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 plz rate:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentsolo06 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Since you're a new member, there are some things you will need to know. First, Divine-Beast cards are not playable in the actual card game, so they're not actually supposed to be posted here. If you switch it to a Dragon-type, you can avoid a lot of blunt comments (like in the Acerbus thread). Second, 4000 ATK/DEF is far too high for almost any monster, unless it has some serious drawbacks. Also, it's especially high for a Level 8 monster. Consider dropping the ATK/DEF to the lower 3000s/upper 2000s, and maybe raising the Level to 9. Along those same lines, you can more easily justify higher stats by adding drawbacks to the card. Third, since "Lucidus" is another card you made, the members here prefer you to post related cards you've made with this one, or at least link to it so they can understand the whole idea. You've got some good ideas, just try to balance them out more. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 boring effect, it needs another. And 4000 atk makes it unlike to get destroyed in battle anyway 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Secret rare/rare lettering on a Synchro Monster just does NOT work. I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 ocg errors present, effect is too strong.... picture is good. i believe its meant to be non-Tuner? not non-WATER. 4000/4000 is unrealistic, drop it high 2000's.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 OCG bro look at this http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html this should help ALOT (Im posting this to make OCG better in the World of YMC. Its also in my sig as a pill?) i also see you've stumbled across the "Wonderfull World of Trent" or you just coped your pics from other users lol.To OP try lowering ATK some (or Alot)4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Way OPed even for a god, it needs to be the type divine, I can't actually see the name, overused pic, and 4000 ATK and DEF? I know Obelisk has that but it's nowhere as overpowered as this. I suggest you put on Lucidus, the Shining Warrior, and make it really hard to summon, let alone Synchro Fuse it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 A rare synchro.....-.-Good if you want to read the name xDuninspired effectUber OP'dDivine beast..!? Pic is okOCG is close to average 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gigansword Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 there made it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It's FIRE not Fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 don't make it divine beast type, it's unrealistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 you still didnt change the divine beast type.. so the rate i gave before remains the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 You may have made it slightly better, but you didn't fix some major problems. Just take this as a rule of thumb, don't make dragon gods unless you seriously know what your doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 FIX: "Lucidus, the Shining Warrior" + 1 or more non-Water non-Tuner monstersWhile this card is on the field, FIRE monsters your opponent controls cannot attack. A bit bland effect. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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