ANGEL CARDS!(: MY FIRST CARDS DONT BE SO BAD PLEASE! JE JE

[wero-vasto]

this are my first cards je je i bassed this on angels :P please dont be so bad jeje is my first aportment ^^

 

1 LIGHT tuner monster + 1 or more Fairy non-tuner monster.

When this card is summoned select one spell card from your graveyard and add it to your hand. When this card is removed from the field return all monster cards on the field to their respective deck and shuffle the deck. If a Fallen Angel Azrael - The Dead is face up in your side of the field this card is unnafected by your opponents card's effects.

1 DARK tuner monster + 1 or more Fairy non-tuner monster.

When this card is summoned select one monster card from your graveyard and add it to your hand. When this card is removed from the field destroy all monster cards on the field. If a Arcangel Uriel - The Wisdom Judge is face up in your side of the field this card is unnafected by your opponents card's effects.

You cannot activate this card at least an "Arcangel Uriel - The Wisdom Judge" and a "Fallen Angel Uriel - The Dead" are on your graveyard. At the cost of 1000 Life Points you can special summon 1 "Wisdom Arcangel Gabriel" or "Death Chaos Reaper" from your hand, deck or graveyard, regardless the summon conditions.

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by sending an "Arcangel Uriel- The Wisdom Judge" and a "Fallen Angel Azrael - The Dead" you control to the graveyard. When this card is summoned select one spell card from your gaveyard and add it to your hand. Once per turn you can send one card from your hand to the graveyard. Then activate the appropriate effects, based on the type of card that you discard:

• Spell card: Destroy one card on the field.

• Trap card: Your opponent cannot activate spell or trap cards until the end of the turn.

• Monster card: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponents life points, if you activate this effect you cannot declare attack this turn.

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by sending an "Arcangel Uriel- The Wisdom Judge" and a "Fallen Angel Azrael - The Dead" you control to the graveyard. When this card is summoned select one monster card from your gaveyard and add it to your hand. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the graveyard. If the card is a monster remove it from play.

 

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You cannot activate this card at least there is an "Arcangel Uriel - The Wisdom Judge" or a "Fallen Angel Azrael - The Dead" in your side of the field and in your graveyard. Discard your entire hand and return one "Arcangel Uriel - The Wisdom Judge" or "Fallen Angel Azrael - The Dead" from your side of the field and graveyard to your extra deck. Then destroy all the cards on the field and special summon a "Wisdom Arcangel Gabriel" or " Death Chaos Reaper" from your deck or graveyard regardless summon condition. The monster summoned by this effect cannot declare attack this turn.

 

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Broken Wings". This card cannot attack at least you discard one card from your hand. When this card destroy a monster by battle (without infilcted damage to your opponents life points) you can select 2 cards from your gaveyard and add it to your hand. If this card inflicts battle damage reduce his attack x200.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Broken Wings". This card cannot declare attack at least you discard one card from you hand. If this card inflicts batlle damage you can select up to 2 cards in your graveyard an add it to your hand. If this card destroy a monster by battle (without inflicted damage to your opponent's life points) reduce his attack x200.

 

 

 

 

 

1 DARK Fairy type monster + 1 LIGHT Fairy type monster.

This card atributte is also treated as DARK. This card cannot declare attack at least you discard a card from your hand. Each time this card destroy a LIGHT or DARK monster by battle it can attack again. Increase this card attack x100 for each Fairy monster in your graveyard.

 

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned at least you send 3 monster you control to the graveyard. This card cannot declare attack at least you discard one card from your hand. Once per turn you can select one card from the graveyard and add it to your hand. Then discard one card from your hand. Once per turn you can decrease this card attack x300 and return one card from your graveyard to your hand.

 

 

 

 

[hollowmaster999]

Don't post links to the cards, when you're done with them, click on the card and copy/paste the link under it into the post. Man, newbs gotta learn how to post cards!

 

EDIT: Okay, I can see the cards, huh... First, it should be "Fairy" not Angel-type, okay?

Uriel is OP, lower ATK and DEF to around 3000/2700, but I think that's pushing it... Also, the effect of drawing a card for each card returned is too much... Maybe draw a card for every two cards returned?

"The Dead" should lower its ATK and DEF to 2700/3000 (I see you're trying to reverse it with Uriel) again, draw a card for every two cards destroyed. And both cards need a drawback or a cost, right now they're too over powered.

The spell card has terrible OCG, try fixing that. The last two monsters' effects are too small to understand, post the effects under the cards... Well since I can't really understand half of them, and the other half is Overpowered, overall a 5/10 from me. You can do better, I'm sure, try to make the cards a little more balanced, Okay?

[wero-vasto]

well as i was saying is my first intent so thank you so much i'll check that

[hollowmaster999]

Yeah, you work on that. I'll check it once it's fixed.

[Lord Smeagle]

I'm going to assume you're translating into English; Fairies are Angels in Japan anyway, so it's not a huge deal, but we prefer the English types, thx.

 

These are good...other than the OCG, these are fantastic for a new member. A bit on the OP'd side, but not horribly so. I think the worst offender here is the Spell Card. Give it a cost, like 1000 Life Points, and I think it'll be acceptable.

 

Death Chaos Reaper is also OP'd. I would take out the bit about nuking all the Spells/Traps when he's summoned and drop his ATK; then it should be good.

[Frozen Judgment]

Not bad for a new member. Lots of OCG errors and unbalanced. 7.5/10.

[wero-vasto]

well, thanks to all of you.! i have change it! i think that now are more balanced than before jeje well just comment and tell me if that's ok please

[Tacobill123]

i like these cards. there good. 10/10

[ragnarok1945]

although mostly unbalanced, this is still a good start for someone new.

 

7/10

[Archelaus]

Good for someone who is new, like Ragnarok said. But mostly, they're OP, and UP.

 

7.5/10

[wero-vasto]

thanks to all of you, well i'll let this cards like they're xD but i'm gone to do more of the same set.

again thanks to all of you!

[wero-vasto]

i have post 20 new cards (: 5 magics, 4 traps and 11 monster. Please rate and comment, if you see a mistake like a card OP, UP or OCG just tell which one is and what can i do to make it better.

thanks in advance

[Breakaway]

You know if your not useing square card or useing cards with borders open them with paint and fix em lol yeah some are a little OP and there is some UP ones but Excelent for a new member no joke great great start keep it up you will soon learn and get alot better (Something i herd when i started)

for first time set 9/10

 

ps. if you dont know how to crop pictures i can help just PM me

[wero-vasto]

thanks thanks!(:

[wero-vasto]

some comment?

[wero-vasto]

any comment??

[wero-vasto]

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