fartomatic Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 this is my first card hope u enjoy! please rat[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 What is this? It has the pic of an already existant card, its OP'ed, it has a fake type, horrible OCG, I have nothing positive to say about this. 1/10 (Since your new) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fartomatic Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 well sorry! its my first card let me see your first card ever! then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Pic - 0/10 - Its a real card's pic .....Effect - 0/10 - Think of the OCG Errors as little boys in a dark room with a Pedo Bear. For every little boy the Bear touchs, you have 1 OCG Error. Looks like the Pedo Bear has touched alot of boys tonight. -.-Originality - 0/10 - Exodia is dead ........ looooong dead (in other words, you shouldn't make cards based on him, he's old) Overall - 0/30 = 0% = 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 have to agree with the above.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-143639.htmlthats the thread to my first card, seeing as you asked.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OCG errors. Pic is from a real card. Op'ed -10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 My first cards were actually in the written cards section, so I didn't have to worry about the pic. I made them similar to Stardust dragon with a swarming burn effect. Most people's complaints about them were that they were copied from stardust and bad OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Pic is unoriginal. OCG has errors. It is OP. The name is all capitalized, which is bad. Fake Type. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Capitalised name, the pic is already used(!), fake type, no Spirit rules, OCG errors, illegal ATK value, outdated OCG. 0/10. Check the OCG Thread for info and scout the forum for advice. It is balanced. How? well sorry! its my first card let me see your first card ever! then [spoiler=Very well] I think it was pretty good for a first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Capitalised name' date=' the pic is already used(!), fake type, no Spirit rules, OCG errors, illegal ATK value, outdated OCG. 0/10. Check the OCG Thread for info and scout the forum for advice. It is balanced. How? Wait, I didn't read the ATK and DEF. 0.o So it isn't balanced. Sorry, my mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 this is just Exodia Necros's pic it is not one bit realistic 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It is balanced. Not really. well sorry! its my first card let me see your first card ever! then[spoiler=Here tis] It's decent for a first card methinks. First thing, don't yell at other people. Maybe it's not yelling but whatever.... Of course when people start off it's not gonna go too well, but just accept it and learn from it. Yelling, cursing, and calling people out can lead you to getting negative reputation, generally disliked and banned. I'm not gonna criticize you as much as these other guys O_o... but just take your time and look around and do a little research on what makes a quality card. Look at higher level contests and see what's up. Notice the grammar they use and how they word things. Whenever I'm stumped on how to word something, I ALWAYS use Yugioh.wikia.com. That's a database of every card and more. Just search a card with a similar effect and voila you gots yourself a decently worded effect. Pictures. If you need pictures, always go to Deviantart. That's a MAAAAJOR art hub. I find almost all of my pictures there. If you can't find squat, just Google it. These guys do have a point even though they have an odd way of saying it. It's taboo to use an existing image of a card. And ya always gotta think of a balanced effect for it. If you're gonna have a card that devastates your opponent so much, ya gotta be sure that that card devastates you almost as much or that it requires a lot in order to activate it. Also, don't focus too much on fake types. A lot of other guys on here don't take to well with it. O_o. Good luck. And KEEP MAKING CARDS!!! You'll only get BETTER by making MORE! And PRACTICE! Lots of practice. Keep posting cards and keep accepting the feedback! Good Luck! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Lets begin, shall we? Or, to save my time, you could look at my sig, and aplly EVERYTHING in there to this topic ten times over. But since you insist....1) The pic is that of an existing card. Who told you to do that? What made you think to do that? I'm just gonna stop there, before I get myself worked up.2) 6500 ATK? Really? May I remind you, the MOST POWERFUL CARDS IN THE GAME have 5000 ATK/DEF. Going over that = utter noob.3) Oh, the effect. As if the ATK wasn't bad enough, you made the EFFECT!!!!!!4) And finally, the OCG. 'Nough said. All-in-all, I rate your topic...FAIL/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 So OP its unrealistic. Terrible OCG and Picture is already a real cards. 0/100 on the picture rating. Overall...Honestly 1/10 The 1 is for effort. I apologize for being so rude and blunt about my ratings I just feel a tad off today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinzo Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Pic is unoriginal. OCG has errors. It is OP. The name is all capitalized' date=' which is bad. Fake Type. [b']0[/b]/10 fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It is balanced. Not really. well sorry! its my first card let me see your first card ever! then[spoiler=Here tis] It's decent for a first card methinks. First thing' date=' don't yell at other people. Maybe it's not yelling but whatever.... Of course when people start off it's not gonna go too well, but just accept it and learn from it. Yelling, cursing, and calling people out can lead you to getting negative reputation, generally disliked and banned. I'm not gonna criticize you as much as these other guys O_o... but just take your time and look around and do a little research on what makes a quality card. Look at higher level contests and see what's up. Notice the grammar they use and how they word things. Whenever I'm stumped on how to word something, I ALWAYS use Yugioh.wikia.com. That's a database of every card and more. Just search a card with a similar effect and voila you gots yourself a decently worded effect. Pictures. If you need pictures, always go to Deviantart. That's a MAAAAJOR art hub. I find almost all of my pictures there. If you can't find squat, just Google it. These guys do have a point even though they have an odd way of saying it. It's taboo to use an existing image of a card. And ya always gotta think of a balanced effect for it. If you're gonna have a card that devastates your opponent so much, ya gotta be sure that that card devastates you almost as much or that it requires a lot in order to activate it. Also, don't focus too much on fake types. A lot of other guys on here don't take to well with it. O_o. Good luck. And KEEP MAKING CARDS!!! You'll only get BETTER by making MORE! And PRACTICE! Lots of practice. Keep posting cards and keep accepting the feedback! Good Luck! :D[/quote'] what he said. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OCG needs a lot of work. Pic is of a real card. Name is all capitalized. OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 It is balanced. Not really. well sorry! its my first card let me see your first card ever! then[spoiler=Here tis] It's decent for a first card methinks. First thing' date=' don't yell at other people. Maybe it's not yelling but whatever.... Of course when people start off it's not gonna go too well, but just accept it and learn from it. Yelling, cursing, and calling people out can lead you to getting negative reputation, generally disliked and banned. I'm not gonna criticize you as much as these other guys O_o... but just take your time and look around and do a little research on what makes a quality card. Look at higher level contests and see what's up. Notice the grammar they use and how they word things. Whenever I'm stumped on how to word something, I ALWAYS use Yugioh.wikia.com. That's a database of every card and more. Just search a card with a similar effect and voila you gots yourself a decently worded effect. Pictures. If you need pictures, always go to Deviantart. That's a MAAAAJOR art hub. I find almost all of my pictures there. If you can't find squat, just Google it. These guys do have a point even though they have an odd way of saying it. It's taboo to use an existing image of a card. And ya always gotta think of a balanced effect for it. If you're gonna have a card that devastates your opponent so much, ya gotta be sure that that card devastates you almost as much or that it requires a lot in order to activate it. Also, don't focus too much on fake types. A lot of other guys on here don't take to well with it. O_o. Good luck. And KEEP MAKING CARDS!!! You'll only get BETTER by making MORE! And PRACTICE! Lots of practice. Keep posting cards and keep accepting the feedback! Good Luck! :D[/quote'] what he said. :) Haha. Thanks. I always try for positive reinforcement and encouragement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 terrible. -368 Boom Pts and if you want to c my first card... [spoiler=My First Card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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