My first custom subtype

[axrider625]

http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Archangel%20-%20Aormered&cardtype=Ritual&subtype=Sky%20Lord&attribute=Wind&level=6&magictraptype=None&rarity=Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/298171/966498262.jpg&set1=arch&set2=angel&inset=true&type=Warrior&description=This%20monster%20can%20only%20be%20Ritual%20Summoned%20with%20the%20Ritual%20Spell%20Card%2C%20%22Archangel%20Ritual%22.%20When%20an%20%22Archangel%22%20monster%20is%20Summoned%2C%20you%20can%20pay%20200%20Life%20Points%20to%20remove%20from%20play%201%20face-up%20monster%20on%20your%20opponent%27s%20side%20of%20the%20field%20and%20inflict%20damage%20to%20its%20controller%20equal%20to%20half%20of%20its%20ATK.&circulation=&atk=2000&def=0&creator=axrider625&year=2009&serial=71972378

 

lore

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Archangel Ritual". When an "Archangel" monster is Summoned, you can pay 200 Life Points to remove from play 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage to its controller equal to half of its ATK.

[attachment=62396][attachment=62396]

[zombiepromking]

I see no card. OCG needs work. The effect feels pretty bland.

 

EDIT: NVM, OCG is fine. Sorry read too quickly

 

6/10

[Kato_Zenamara]

Umm... no, its NOT ok. If no picture, no comments. No comments = u fail at life.

[ragnarok1945]

not the link, please post the actual card itself up here

[Archelaus]

Post the Pic.