TitanKing Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Effect:As long as this card remains face up one the field it is also treated as a "spellcaster".When this card is summoned you can Special summon 1 level 4 or lower machine Type monster form your graveyard to the field.When this card is destroyed you can destroy one face-up continuous Spell or Trap to Special Summon this card. another card i made........the ocg grammer is not good so if u help me fix it plz. other then that tell me what you think and how i can improve the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 You have a good amount of OCG errors that can be easily fixed. They are mostly capitalization errors. Do you mind PMing me the original image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TitanKing Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 You have a good amount of OCG errors that can be easily fixed. They are mostly capitalization errors. Do you mind PMing me the original image? i will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 you misspelled Cybernetic. Anyways as for the effect using it once per duel is too little, make it more frequent 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 It looks more like a Psychic-type to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 FIX: While this card is on the field, it is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy 1 face-up Continuous Spell or Trap Card you control instead. A bit bland effect. 7/10 [Edit: Fixed some errors thanks to sephiroth] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 FIX:While this card is on the field, it is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy 1 face-up Continuous Spell or Trap card you control instead. missed out on some of the caps Archelaus.... i fix'd ur fix.effect is ok. bit of swarm about it but nothing really different.7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Yeah I just noticed. I was rushing when I posted the fix.xD It's a good card after all. [Edit: "Card" in Monster Cards, Spell Cards and Trap Cards, is Capitalized.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 damn. you win this round (waves fist)i was rushing to type the fix'd fix... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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