Trinitial Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 A trap to go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 You should change the description a bit so it doesn't sound so awkward (e.g. you said "this beast" twice and "this creature" once in just two sentences. Also, it could use a whole lot more support (a card that lets you tribute it for something doesn't really qualify as great support). If you're planning to make a set, don't worry about that because you can do a whole lot of stuff to make this better. For the trap, put the monsters' names in quotation marks and remove "You can" from the beginning. Specify where you can Special Summon the Blue Eyes White Dragon or Red Eyes Black Dragon from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 You should change the description a bit so it doesn't sound so awkward (e.g. you said "this beast" twice and "this creature" once in just two sentences. Also' date=' it could use a whole lot more support (a card that lets you tribute it for something doesn't really qualify as great support). If you're planning to make a set, you can do a whole lot of stuff to make this better. For the trap, put the monsters' names in quotation marks and remove "You can" from the beginning. Specify where you can Special Summon the Blue Eyes White Dragon or Red Eyes Black Dragon from.[/quote'] Alright, I'll have it fixed in a second. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 um. this desn't seem good. flavour text is meh. effect of trap is odd. try again ~2/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Alright, it is now officially edited :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 unimpressive trap support for the vanilla. Its effect is way too dull 2.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Maybe it should Special Summon both...or just Special Summon any 2 Dragons from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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