NeriesUmbra Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 [align=center]This is designed to take you'r opponent by surprise. Read the first card then before you read the second try figure out what the next cards going to do it's good practice. Read then think is that all this card is worth.[spoiler=read first] [spoiler=now this]this is what the ATK was for not for power but for a direct hit.Did you see that one coming. Effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Salnura Hermit Of Power" you control. Deal damage eaqual to the ATK of the "Salnura Hermit Of Power" that was used to summon this card. [spoiler=read this] Effect When this card is selected as an attack target or as a target for an effect you can Special Summon from your deck 1 "Fremis Familiar" then send this card back to your hand. Switch target to 1 "Fremis Familiar" you control. [spoiler=now this.] effect When this card is destroyed you can special Summon 1 "Fremi The Delicate Ocean" from you'r hand and increas it's DEF by 500.[spoiler=finely this] effect "Fremis Familiar" + "Fremi The Delicate Ocean"When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon from either players Graveyard as many monsters eqaul to the number of "Fremi familiar" in your Graveyard..There will be more.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 ok since you're creating a new archtype I'll let the fake types go this time the 1500 burn for card2's effect is ok, but it needs another effect or it's too dull likewise card1's effect is WAY too dull 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Do you not get the Idea of the effects, as the great strategist Sun Ce once said when your week act strong and when you'r strong act week exactly what these are supposed to do and I don't think you understand how complex these two effects really are since it is built to play with the mind.Anyway did you figure out that the last thing you needed to worry about from a card that only has ATK was it's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hirikiri Inaghe Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 6/10and dont get mad he just said what he thought and i agree with him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 I did not get mad so don't patronize me and I was just explaining that it can't be that dull because of it's complexity it is genius.Oh and if you did not get the strategy of the card it was the fact that it forces you'r opponet to defend against you'r enormous ATK when in actual fact you'r ATK is week because it has no backup but it looks week on burning so the opponent would not even think of a burn ATK so they won't deafened against it even though you where aiming for a burn ATK. When strong act week.my strongest point was my burn which looked like I could not doWhen week act strong.My weakest point was my ATK but this is the only thing my opponent fears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 For the first card:FIX: During each of your Standby Phases, this card gains 500 ATK. For the Second:FIX: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Salnura Hermit Of Power" you control. When this card is Special Summon this way, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the monster Tributed to Special Summon this card. Effects are a bit dull. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Sorry, but I have to agree with both of them. I hate fake types, I did them on my first month but then I relized I was a newb back then. I stopped doing that. Overall 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 fake types are ok if they are executed correctly. these are alright, i'd need to see some more to give an accurate rating.a 3000 ATK monster for tributing 1 Level 4 is a bit to much. maybe drop the atk to 2300ish.the damage factor is ok, but overall the effects are basic.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 It seams sephiroth is the only duelist here since he pointed out the flaws in it's usefulness and not something that I got wrong on purpose to make you moan and wow did not expect so many people to fool for that I must be smarter than I thought.Oh and cling it Damen is just the same as them calling cards Psychic. P.S. Problems with my card. 1. As sephiroth pointed out bit to much ATK for one tribute but not when you consider red eyes darkness metal dragon has 2800 ATK and only needs one tribute thats less specific than this so this card has 200 more ATK and not as good effect but it is harder to summon so it having to high ATK is questionable. 2. way to much damage since that damage is part of the cost so since the effect is so strong the card should have less ATK. 3. Effects sound simple but this is a bluff built to take you'r opponent by suprise since the stratogey round the two effects is highly more complex than there boaring demeaner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 WAGA WAAAAA BLBLBLBLM!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 These cards are... near genious... the plan... The pics are great. I see u like fake-types... me too. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thank you some one finely understands some strategy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 WAGA WAAAAA BLLBLBLBLM!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 It's all pretty basic, not very original and it has a synchro.But the pic's are pretty good, so it ballances it somewhat more out.A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 If you did not get the strategy of the card it was the fact that it forces you'r opponet todefend against you'r enormous ATK when in actual fact you'r ATK is week because it has no backup but it looks week on burning so the opponent would not even think of a burn ATK so they won't deafened against it even though you where aiming for a burn ATK.When strong act week.my strongest point was my burn which looked like I could not doWhen week act strong.My weakest point was my ATK but this is the only thing my opponent fears.So in fact pure genius is classed as unoriginal on this site I am to beleave? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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